Reviews for Harry Potter and the Dimensional Trunk
thebetawholived chapter 23 . 10/9/2015
This story was written before the last book was published, and I think it may have been started before the sixth book was published. The writing is good, and I enjoyed the author's writing style. But most of all I appreciated the skilled way in which the author wove creative elements into his story. I don't want to be specific (to avoid spoilers), but some of the elements I believe are unique to this story, are foreshadowed in an honest manner yet are a surprise when they emerge, and contribute to the rich texture of the story.

Thank you for taking the time to write this, and thank you for sharing it!
Navn Ukjent chapter 23 . 8/27/2015
Quite fun story.

I do sometimes want to smack Harry when he leaves his enemies unhurt and ready to fight another day. I do realize that the "all-forgiving" Harry was needed in order to survive the endgame in the room in DOM, but it seems like a stupid way to wage a war!
Ada1229 chapter 23 . 7/28/2015
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!
cynicale chapter 23 . 6/14/2015
Really enjoyed your story, particularly the way you portrayed the House Elves and the other Magical races. Also loved:
- your Harry&Remus dynamic
- the fact that burning days remained an issue despite it being an animagus phoenix rather than a "real" one
- your Neville, Hannah, Blaise and Audra Fletcher
Epeefencer chapter 21 . 6/14/2015
What a load of tosh! With that many witnesses that included teachers like McGonagall there is no way that Malfoy would be able to attack Harry continuously during a Quidditch match, whether or not Hooch was watching. You think that McGonagall, Dumbledore, Flitwick and the others would just sit there and allow that to happen?
Guest chapter 23 . 6/3/2015
great job!
skashley7 chapter 23 . 4/30/2015
I just wanted to say I absolutely adored the relationship between remus and harry; very few people seem to be able to develop a real relationship between the two. great story!
TroyWeb chapter 23 . 4/12/2015
This is a very well written fan fic story.
TroyWeb chapter 18 . 4/10/2015
Harry did a good job with laying down the law to the Dursley's. I hope this is the last we see of them in this story.

I also see Draco is heading towards a big conflict with Harry. Ron is right. Draco is definitely Stalker #3.
TroyWeb chapter 16 . 4/9/2015
Harry's two Animagus forms are interesting. They seem like the opposite sides of his personality.
TroyWeb chapter 12 . 4/7/2015
Harry used his Animagus form very well in this chapter. I like the way you used it in a creative way to help Remus. The conversation with Fawkes was funny too.
Tamzi.k chapter 23 . 4/6/2015
Hellooooo...
I wud like 2 congratulate u...
Dis was a really vry gud story...
It was very entertaining, sometimes vry heart touchng...
Sumtyms 2oooo much fun to read...
I liked d relationship of harry wd d goblins, d houseelfs and d centuars...
I reallyyy dint expectd dis last scene where harry wud inherit smthing frm ny goblins...
It was really a shock, but a nyc 1...
The overall story was vry entertaining...
TroyWeb chapter 6 . 4/6/2015
The interactions of the house elves is very well written. Harry is finding more honorable ways to work with them than S.P.E.W.
TroyWeb chapter 3 . 4/2/2015
This is a good fan fic. I like all of the things you have added to Harry's life. Also I'm glad that there is no bashing so far in the story. It's better when Harry and his friends are working together to become better wizards.
Discontinued123321 chapter 23 . 3/2/2015
It's a solid fic. I will say that that a lot of the time the payoff didn't quite match the build up. Particularly with Harry and Ginny getting together.
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