Reviews for Beautiful
Prongs'LilyFlower chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
omg! that is amazing! absolutely amazing!

i loved it!

was it Remus narrating?

i actually loved it, the descriptions were great, so meaningfull and excellent!

well done!

PLF

x
Victoria Humblydum chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
that was good but depressing. i couldn't figure out from whose point of view it was from though.
Absurd Insanity chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
...amazing. Sad, but horribly true. It pierces, it grabbes, it connects anddestroys. This is what call effective writing. great work.

Feel free to read my fics and give me a few pointers. Thanks.
Friendsofweasley chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
God!

this is one bloody amazing one-shot
gellasmile chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
That was undenieably beautiful... I loved the way the story flows...I cried and got goosebumps...I love the ending... I loved the way you portrayd Lily and Remus...I allways pictured Lily as a calm, smart, perfect "good girl" so this was very interesting...

YOU ARE A VERY VERY VERY TALENTED WRITER

~gella_smile
RavenEcho chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
wow. i'll have to steal the title to describe the story... beautiful. so going on my fave lists.
w123w456w789 chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
This is absolutely beautiful. Possibly the most beautiful Lily/Lupin fic I've read. It's very poetic, and it has this melancholic flow, sort of just makes you want to cry...it really covered my arms with goosebumps. I love this, great work!
EternalEcho chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
So sad. Just the kind of story that rips your heart out and makes you cry. Love it. Also just the kind of story I need for support for my own Remus/Lily, aka Torturing Remus. -Echo
holyheartbreak chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
Poor Remus gets hurt in every one of your stories- but I'm ok with that, for as long as Lily and James are together and happy.

This was beautiful! You have a lovely way with unrequited words :)
Amazing-Daine chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
Now that Ria, was honestly beautiful. I was nearly crying at the end there. You do have a way with unrequoited (sp?) Remus/Lily's. See you in my next review!

-DD-
MindyDeMontarville chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
you mustbe the single most talented writer i have ever had the pleasure of coming across. i think i might turn suicidal if you ever stop writing.
S.B. Kisses chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
That story was wonderful and sad. So nostalgic.
Titou Moony chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
It's really beautiful and sad...é.è loved it.
dracodormiens97 chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
i luv it. it shows a side of the characters that we havent seen before. it shows us that they too are human...brilliant!
MarauderQueen chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
hey i love all of your one shots, you are really talented in writing them. great fic
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