Reviews for A Proverbial Waltz
HannieNannie chapter 2 . 6/13/2016
I absolutely love this, my second time reading
kawaiiwolvesss chapter 2 . 4/10/2016
Awww at least he stayed in the end? I'm assuming? Hoping haha
otaku-at-best chapter 2 . 2/11/2016
AWWWWWWWWE SO CUTE! THIS WAS PERFECT!
tealbrownie chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
it was so gooddd
tealbrownie chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
tthhaatttsss iitttt
Guest chapter 2 . 5/5/2015
I'm pretty sure this was rape
ReaderWriterPoet chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
This story is so sad! But I love it!
Beyond Forgetting chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
I'm just happy to know he came back :) By the way, you really had a good potential in writing. I love how the way you constructed your sentences.
GlitterGoat chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
This was a beautiful story and written so well.

The abstract was of each sentence provided a sense of mystery and the sort of "love" between Chihiro and Haku was also greatly tragic yet so beautiful.

The second chapter did live up to the first one and it was a clever way to make sure Haku stayed this time. I loved this!
Raksha Souza chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
so he stayed? He stayed to raise his daughter right?
LovesDepp chapter 2 . 12/1/2011
AWWWW to cute
edcllen chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
You should really make this a full story, it is amazing :)
Spikers chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
Amazing. I love it! Its cute, a lil sexy, and altogether good penmenship. Good balancing it out. _ ill definatly be clicking the 'favorite story' & the 'favorite author' buttons. YAY!
Danubio Azul chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
i really love this fic! this was amazing :D ! i hope you continue writing! see ya!
weartheseshorts chapter 2 . 12/21/2009
This has to be a favorite. The way you elegantly expressed their situation was both subtle and telling. I absolutely love what you have here. Wonderful job.

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