Reviews for When They Stopped Pretending
nurulatikah23 chapter 1 . 6/30
i have read it multiple time already.
trulyme chapter 2 . 6/11
This was such a good read
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23
Genius..i love this onee
highfive for it *****
essicaJoola chapter 2 . 12/31/2015
The kid suit part... I laughed too hard...
Hachiko-Tan chapter 2 . 7/26/2015
J'ai adoré ! Merci beaucoup !
phiphi78 chapter 2 . 5/1/2015
Yeah finally they're together ! You've written it so beautifully , you made me laugh and cry at your fic , i absolutely loved it !
SkysOrder chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
Interesting! Enjoying it!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2015
It was perfect.. loved it !
KateHarris14 chapter 2 . 5/27/2014
that took so long for me to read, but I can honestly say, that it was worth it
GraMyr chapter 2 . 10/28/2013
The Heiji and Kazuha action is so on spot, genius!
The whole "fly me to the moon" part had me melting.
It's impossible to point every great part out in this review, it would end up with re-narrating the whole story again!
I'll never get tired of this story *re-reads it for the 1000th time*
You're one of my all-time favourite authors!
Haibara Ai z chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
You know how you emphasised words by bolding them? I think it would be better with italics... meh.
Anyways, again, the build up was awesome and even though romance isn't my thing, I really enjoyed it. You made me like this couple X3 I love your wit and personality when writing :D
Haibara Ai z chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Woah! The build up! The humour! It's not easy to make me laugh with writing but you did just that. More than once. For your first fanfic, (well first on fanfiction dot net) it's really good.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
Omigod. This was... the LONGEST... twoshot I've ever read. My eyyyeees.

The best one I've ever read, too. x3 All my favorite pairings, along with some good ol' Heiji tormenting. Lot's of humor, fluff, and of course Heiji totally screws up his confession... but it worked. xD
heartmira chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
I definitely cracked up multiple times throughout the story. I have to say, props for keeping them completely in characters, from Shinichi's "oi oi" to Kuroba's teasing to Heiji's last outburst (brilliant). Great job!
Unexpected Hopeless Romantic chapter 2 . 4/20/2012
Okay. This is definitely my favorite work of yours. Very long fic, but worth it. This may even be my favorite HK fic. 3 You have a way with words, my friend. I felt that I was totally there. A spectator watching each move of the characters. I could hear the quarrels and antics of Heiji and Kazuha clearly. With their very supportive friends. :)

Also, it makes me reflect much on my life. :)) I would wait as long as Kazuha to find a guy like Heiji! Haha. Although at some point I could relate! HAHAHAHA. :"

Anyway, thank you so much for writing this fic. This definitely made my day. :) I hope to read more from you. :D Great job! Keep it up! :)
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