Reviews for Kickout
NemoChan320 chapter 4 . 12/19/2014
Oh, I really love this story so far. All your stories are wonderful in fact. Though it has been 8 years or so since this has been updated, I hope you some day find the time finish it. It really is a good story and I would love to see how it progresses!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
Awesome so far. Are you going to make more chapters?
Great how Kyo and Yuki are getting along. Never seemed to do that in the real story.
It shows how they actually do love each other .
Kluddle chapter 4 . 11/5/2011
This is amazing. Seriously. The way you are able to write Yuki and Kyo is astounding, and beautiful. seems as though you've abandoned this...please, tell me that you'll resurrect it...please...
HanjiTitan chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
im like literally sobbing...oh my god
lucimonk chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
please please update :( even though it seems like you have abandoned this fic for long now :(
Aestivates chapter 4 . 7/23/2010
This has got to be one of the most well-written, intriguing and /in-character/ fics I've found so far for Kyo and Yuki. Seriously, only four chapters in and I'm already in love-that makes this really something special.

I can't pin it exactly, but there's a quality in your writing that is incredibly engaging. The dialogue is sharp; it flows well and the voices are very distinct. The narrative is descriptive and interesting without being at all overwhelming, which is really welcoming with the particular tone of this fic. Story-wise, I'd imagine the plot itself isn't entirely unique in this fandom, but you've definitely taken a unique spin on it, and I know for a fact that it has to be one of my favourite takes on a canon what-if.

It's been four and a half years, making it depressingly unlikely that this is going to be continued, but I just wanted to let you know that I really see a huge amount of potential in this and that your writing must be spectacular now, after all these years. If you do decide to see this story through to the end one day, I know I'll be looking forward to it-there is simply not enough great fic in this fandom anymore, you know?

Excellent work, and thank you for a great read so far.
kougra chapter 4 . 1/29/2010
I love it Please update soon
fireywolfchild chapter 4 . 4/13/2009
what happens! what happens! you have such an interesting story and you just leave it here! No!
MyWorldxRewritten chapter 4 . 4/12/2009
Okay, I'm actually gonna beg...

Kaze Kimizu chapter 4 . 7/7/2008
Wow. And to think that I hated KyoxYuki until right now...

I truly hope that you haven't put this story on hold. It is a mural of words, a true work of art. I'm dying to learn more about Yuki's circumstances, and I'm sure Kyo has a lot to say.

I'm sure people have been hounding you for over a year now, but please update? Something this good should be cherished, and an update...well, it would preserve and spread this masterful fic to all the other Fruits Basket fans.
Cumcakesxxxx chapter 4 . 6/7/2008
This story is GREAT. It's just amazing, nobody but you and the author of "Not Gonna Get Us" have written KyoxYuki the way I prefer-and find it at it's best!

But that author has obviously abandoned that wonderful story just when things heated up-please! Yo haven't done the same have you! Over TWO years of not updating-please! You MUST continue! Gosh, this is JUST how I like to read KyoxYuki, with a sudden but soft plotline. An amazing change that compels Kyo to learn about Yuki, to treasure his presence! You show that life still continues around them, just as the author of that other story did-you two do it perfectly! You don't force the plot and the subtleness and the changes, you just let them flow, slowly taking off! I LOVE the way you show Kyo and Yuki's little convos, such trivial things...what movies were good, which books were better... Things friends would converse about... And I still wanna know what fate Yuki REALLY did save Kyo from, why he cares so much-AUGH! I could go on, but usually my long reviews get cut off!
AluminumMuse chapter 4 . 4/28/2008
I actaully like this. You give Kyo a distinctive character without making him the total ass he's usually painted as, which is nice. Also, the stirrings of plot. Still, it reads a little dry. Remember that emotion comes from the words, use nouns and verbs that reflect the feeling you are trying to create. People being somber doesn't make most readers sad, you have to go a step further.
ColleraZorn chapter 4 . 12/23/2007
s-s-so-so SAD! Herry up and make it happy before I cry...jk lol
Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 4 . 12/17/2007
if you dont hurry up and update

i'll never ever read any of your stories again!

if you dont update, i'll track you down and tickle you to insanity until you update.

i know being insane and updating at the same time is difficult,

but i like torturing people, so i'll set aside plenty off time to make it happen
Zoius and the Devil chapter 4 . 10/21/2007
one of the (few) good kyoxyuki fics out there. i'm really enjoying this fic. will you update, though?
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