|Reviews for Subcontractor|
| Damia - Queen of the Gypsi's chapter 15 . 8/25/2005
Very nice. I'm glad that everyone didn't die. I liked how protective of Gunn Illyria was also. IT was amusing and touching.
Do I smell a sequel in the works?
WRite more soon.
- Damia -
| Lucinda chapter 14 . 8/24/2005
snicker... yeah, in THAT situation, telling someone to try to stay out of trouble... Just a little bit late for that.
| Bob the Almighty chapter 14 . 8/24/2005
Heh. 'Try and stay out of trouble'... and they're going off to fight an army of demons. I love this fic.
| Ann of Midnight chapter 14 . 8/23/2005
Stay out of trouble... hihi
| Damia - Queen of the Gypsi's chapter 14 . 8/23/2005
LOL! Stay out of trouble, Please. So ... Veronica's special, and Willow knows it? Something's going down. Do they get to meet Illeria? I loved the demon king. Write more soon.
- Damia -
| Allen Pitt chapter 14 . 8/23/2005
Neat-maybe there's still time to save Gunn, Spike, Angel, Illyria... it wouldn't have been realistic to save Wesley, I suppose... hm, any chance of Connor being spotted? He'd really freak the scoobs out ( Angel & Darla for parents)... but Illyria would do it also. Willow might have some guilt issues over never following returning Angel's phone call / plea for help... and she should...
Shanshu in the air? ... Lilah won't be happy about wesley dying either come to think of it... Evil, but she & Wes. had a 'thing'...
All we need now is for Groo to show up...
| Ann of Midnight chapter 13 . 8/19/2005
| Allen Pitt chapter 13 . 8/19/2005
Yep, Fred was the key point -Angel lost one of his people, and ... her death is one of the reasons he never tried to contact the slayers again after that-they let Fred die ( to his way of thinking... and never even bothered to call back)-on their side, the 'he never called again, so it must be ok' would have been mirrored by "sure Willow was unavailable - but she never bothered to call and find out if Fred was still sick..."
I don't suppose this can all end up preventing Wesley's death, too? There's evidence from Joss interviews that "Fred" was going to resurface inside Illyria in the next season.
Anyway-news of Fred's death should shake up the scoobies a bit... also what's become of her...
just being at the alley at midnight might save the remnant of the team, I'm hoping they are a little bit more proactive and manage to save Wesley ...
Meanwhile- Gunn's hit is a bit funny in that -she's a US Senator. I would imagine that would attract a LOT of attention... a sequel to this might deal with the search for the 'assassin' ...?
| slaygal166 chapter 12 . 8/17/2005
This story is incredible! only thing is that willow probly would be less afraid of using magic, no that shes a goddess or whatever after turning the potentials into slayers. please update soon!
| Allen Pitt chapter 12 . 8/16/2005
Even with them showing up to help at the alley-there's still going to be some tension, I would think -over Illyria -on Angel's side, he'd be a bit bitter that Giles refused to help when Fred was dying. On their side, Illyria is an Old One-which come to think of it is exactly what the Master used to worship...
It'd be a fun meeting, anyway...
I suppose it's too much to hope for that they could save wesley? Maybe arrive just after Illyria kills Vail and departs, then Willow revives him? CPR or something, ie Illyria is hardly a doctor in judging what's fatal etc...
| Mats Forsen chapter 11 . 8/12/2005
Aww.. the story was above excellent until chapter 11. I'm afraid you lost me there, I was hoping they'd be "in the dark" so to say the whole story. :( Ah well, good luck to you with the rest.
| Allen Pitt chapter 11 . 8/10/2005
Yes! Now it all makes sense. I'm glad for the mention of the recent Giles/Angel problem - after not helping Fred, it'd be a cold day in heck before Angel would call any of the scoobies to ask for help again -
Glad Cordy mentioned it wasn't her during that Willow visit...now all that's left (aside from helping at the alley) would be for them to find out about Connor. heh heh...
| BeckettFan chapter 10 . 8/4/2005
Ooh! yay! Willow-ness! lol! ooh! she was the one who hacked into their computers! lol! arent i smart? lol! plz post more soon! i love this fic and i really wanna kno wot happens next!
| Majin Gojira chapter 10 . 8/3/2005
I love it when It hits the Fan. And boy, did It hit the Fan.
| Allen Pitt chapter 10 . 8/3/2005
Moment of truth time, at last... should be an interesting conversation. last time Willow / Cordelia met, it wasn't really cordelia... they haven't "met" since Sunnydale, they've spoken on the phone ( Willow, about harmony) that's about it...
The weirdest part is, they know C. is dead, but will be willing to believe it's her...
presumably this was to get in touch with them without alerting W&H?