|Reviews for Subcontractor|
| Allen Pitt chapter 10 . 8/3/2005
Moment of truth time, at last... should be an interesting conversation. last time Willow / Cordelia met, it wasn't really cordelia... they haven't "met" since Sunnydale, they've spoken on the phone ( Willow, about harmony) that's about it...
The weirdest part is, they know C. is dead, but will be willing to believe it's her...
presumably this was to get in touch with them without alerting W&H?
| Ann of Midnight chapter 10 . 8/3/2005
It was just getting good! Er... I mean it was just getting better. I love your V Mars Dad voice and I love Xander visiting and Willow and EVERYTHING! This has been a delight to read but when you have something that reads so effortlessly and builds, it is hard to keep stopping for chapters. Seriously, I'm dying.
| Tommy Byrn chapter 10 . 8/3/2005
Dude this story is turning into drug that I need a fix from. You've got me hooked. I can't wait for your next chappy. Cheers!
| BeckettFan chapter 9 . 8/2/2005
Ooh! very Bond, James Bond! lol! yay! Xander! *dances* i love Xander! newayz i love this fic! i love Angel, and ive recently started watching Veronica Mars, coz its just started over here (NZL), and i heard its the new Buffy! lol! newayz plz post more asap! i love this fic!
| Ann of Midnight chapter 9 . 8/1/2005
Dude! I was just reading this on TTH and couldn't log in. Site goes a little nuts on me sometimes. Anyway, my jaw has dropped and I am freaking (on the inside)- I'm really loving this story, and the fact that I haven,t got a clue where you're going with this at all. Loved Weevil and his 'posse's reaction to the Hellmouth. Keep crossing yourselves boys!
| Magic-Amethyst80 chapter 9 . 8/1/2005
Wow, amazing story. At first I was skeptical about a Buffy/Veronica Mars crossover, considering that one show deals with the supernatural, one doesn't, you have certainly proven me wrong.
You have done a very good job capturing Veronica's character, and utilizing almost of that show's cast, I don't think there is any need for Logan or Duncan in this story.
I love the way you have avoided turning Veronica into a Mary Sue, by not having her catch on to any of the supernatural aspects of the story, being more suspecious about the strange behavior of Weevil and his grandmother. Great twist having them all frightened of Sunnydale.
One detail I must nitpick, you have made a few errors with American slang. Veronica would not be "phoning," anyone nor would any American character refer to their apartment as a "flat."
| Allen Pitt chapter 9 . 8/1/2005
At last... Xander arrives... hm, kinda surprised Willow's hacker rep didn't come up... but what the heck. Nice tie-in to Warren & the rest of the trio. Jonathan and...uh, Tucker's brother.
It'll be interesting to see what Xander says and what he doesn't say, in all of this. Imagine if they get Cordelia on the speaker phone. Heh. Depends on how mean she wants to be... she can say stuff that'll hint to him that she's a vampire (while leaving VM & dad wondering why X. is getting upset)-doubt she'll do it, but would be funny...
as in "I've gotten together with Harmony... decided to adopt her lifestyle!" etc..
He'd recognize C's voice, would be quite a shock I'd imagine... the scoobies don't really know much of anything about what happened to the Fang Gang over the years, so it's likely Xander doesn't know about the visions let alone the part-demony-ness etc etc... (Just as Giles had no idea that Wesley wasn't a wimp any longer )...
I have to keep remembering this is still just before "Not Fade Away"... so the scoobies have max suspicion towards the fang gang...
At this point maybe we'll finally find out what Cordelia is up to-?
| Allen Pitt chapter 8 . 7/31/2005
Nice tie-ins to Sunnydale...So-looks like they've attracted Willow's interest... next I'd expect a visit from Faith & Robin. Please god, let it not be Andrew who is sent to investigate
Cordelia has to know surveillance will only alert Willow that something is going on, so it must be that she wants Willow to investigate. Angel found out that a direct appeal for help won't work, is Cordelia in effect tricking the scoobies into looking into things? So there'll be some slayers at the alley at end of NFA? At the least a one eyed guy might show up...
** Veronica might call on Mac, her computer-savvy friend, to check out her computer system-Mac knows more about computers than VM, and it'd be nice continuity...
Has Weevil ever met Faith? They both like motorcycles, and how many people like that are there in California? Just kidding...
| Beboppin' Betty chapter 8 . 7/30/2005
As always, good chapter. I like your style and your knowledge of not only the shows but of the professions themselves. Keep up the great work.
| teejplease chapter 7 . 7/15/2005
oh god. cordy wants everyoen but angel to know she's SLIGHTLY alive.. atleast that's what i think.
| Allen Pitt chapter 7 . 7/15/2005
One wonders why Cordelia doesn't just phone the scoobs directly...it's not like it would weird them out THAT much ... unless she's trying to quietly maneuver so that the scoobs are 'there' at the alley at end of NFA without alerting W&H to what Angel & his gang are planning?
After all, it was Cordelia that set up the assassinations of the circle of the black thorn (by giving angel that 'secret vision' thing) so this is all according to her plan...
Hey-are you setting things up so that this is the reason Giles refused to help Angel with Fred/Illyria?
| Roo3 chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
I'm really enjoying this one, especially since I just discovered Veronica Mars myself. Nice pacing, and it's interesting to see the gang through Veronica's eyes. Also good suspense here. I'm wondering what Cordelia is after as well as being intrigued by Weevil's possible Sunnydale connection. Very nice work and I hope to see more soon.
| Allen Pitt chapter 6 . 7/8/2005
One wonders what Weevil knows -good question. Poor Cordelia, it just isn't easy to manipulate bank accounts when you're dead. One wonders how close we are to the final Angel episode...probably very very close at this point... poor W&H ...
I suppose Willow & Kennedy might pay a visit-sad to think this would get their attention when Angel begging for help (to save Fred) got no response. I'd love to know if Willow ever got a phone call from Giles relaying Angel's appeal, or if Giles just sat on it (he doesn't like Angel, or Wesley, to put it mildly)...
| Darklight chapter 5 . 7/6/2005
like it, get more out.
| Dr Gonzo chapter 5 . 7/5/2005
awesome writing as aways dude, the pacing and structure are perfect I always learn alot from reading your work