Reviews for A Nautolan's Life
Random4Now chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
Star Wars rools
Lord Nyax chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Very good story, but, as you said, it is your first tragedy, so it could be a little better. Also, see me for Yoda-talking lessons, becouse sucks your Yoda-talking does.
S.M.Hoffman chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Awsome!Loved it.
Lindsay chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Write faster my puppet! Lol Had to say it. Well...why are you reading this! You should be typing!
skywalker05 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Ok, not bad, though there's a selection of coppy sentances in there. Glee Anselm's a distance from Coruscant; one would thing something would go on during the hyperspace travel, and this is a missed opportunity for characterization and for you to show what the Nautolan kids think of the Jedi. Also, during the OR they were pretty good with getting Force-sensative kids to teh Temple early, and you offer no explanation why these weren't. Pretty good plot though, though the changing of life by attack is cliche. My favorite part so far was your descriptions of Trav Di falling from branches into the water-for some reason that and the first scene of him looking down was more vivid then the rest. MTFBWY