|Reviews for Simply Put|
| Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Awww cute and amusing, I loved it and awesome job but you should make a Hatori Ayame romance fic soon please
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Shigure gasped and tsked
disapprovingly, wagging his finger
at his silver-haired friend. "Poor,
poor, sweet, innocent Aaya," he
sighed, throwing his arm loosely
over the snake's shoulder. "You
have much to learn, cricket; for
one, bi-sexual is attraction to
will you write more?
| Disney's Darling chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
THIS. WOW! I LOVE IT!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
WOOt! Go Ayame! And Shigure for plotting that theory! Excellent job, it was really sweet and funny! Keep up the great work! X3 XD :D
| The happiest emo on earth chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
WHAT! How could Hatori just get back to reading his book like it was normal for Ayame to come into the room and kiss him just like that?
| secret25 chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
that was so funny! hehehe loved the sarcastic comments from ayame! fave!
| Grievous daydreamer chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
*blinks*...I have no idea how to react..but in a good way! XD *faves*
| hyper-writer14 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Nice explaining Shiggy. In my fics I make my characters veerryy cautious whenever Shiggy suggests something. They have good reason to be. :P
| HanaTohruShipperMorgan chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Dirty humor (or just any sort of innuendo at all, really) is only good if subtle, you abused ellipses, Ayame is already flamboyant, and this wasn't nearly as good as your other humor fic.
I think that sums it up.
Have a nice day!
| Adi88 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Perfect. Beautiful all around, and I disagree... you're good at humor. Is Hatori honestly reading Lassie book at eighteen-ish or was that sorta proverbial kinda thing? Anywhichway, I love it. Hatori's reaction was priceless.
| FullMoonKohaku chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Make another chapter please!
| vinbunny chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
*hysterically laughing* aaya is sso awesomly cute! hahah.. i just think it odd he wouldnt know what bi was.. i guess the whole 'mens romance' thing made me have another impression of him.. or mabe this was waay before he was school pres? haha loved it!
| littlefiction chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
That was good. Just enough drama, just enough humor, just enough awkwardness, you have a very good balance in this story
| kayla chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
| gabo0 chapter 1 . 11/23/2005