|Reviews for The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse|
| Mondtanz chapter 86 . 12h ago
This is a great story. I made me laugh, cry, flinch, chuckle... and even though it's a little bit older, it's definitely one of my favorites.
I definitely like happy endings.
By the way, have you been reading Bleach too while writing this? Sometimes Fenik and the other demon swords almost "felt" like zanpakutos :-)
| Guest chapter 86 . 2/21
This is probably the best Inuyasha fanfic that I will ever read. It's completely ruined every other story for me! I like your version (except for the part where Kagome cracks a bit towards the end because it made me feel the feels) better than the origional series. Your portrayal of Inuyasha was spot on too. You portrayed everyone well actually. And I love how you gave Kagome a lot of substance. This was just hands down the best story. I think I feel worse now knowing that I finished it than I did when I finished Harry Potter. You're awesome!
| ArthursShadow chapter 86 . 10/22/2013
I just wanted to say that I enjoyed your story reaally much! It kept me up a couple times, even :D you write very well, battles and funny parts and characters.
I felt their pain and joy, I felt I was there for their failures and crowning glory and I loved the ride. This story is so going into ,y 'favourites' section, after which I will go and see if you've got any more of this awesomeness ;)
And I really hope they named the baby 'Fenik!' . Hihi :D
So, eh, I just wanted to say thank you for writing such a wonderful story! May you be writing still and forevermore :)
| kagz chapter 86 . 8/31/2013
WOW! This story is a work of ART! Simply amazing! Thank you for writing it and allowing people to read it.
-A new fan
PS. The only thing I wished for was a mother daughter moment in which Kagomes mom finds out about the miscarriage and some mother/daughter bonding and healing happened.
| Not ur ordinary woman 434 chapter 86 . 6/14/2013
I couldnt stop reading it! This ff has made me laugh, cry, scream etc. Beautifully written! I cannot express how much i loved this story. Rapidly became my favorite. Thank you. Thank you for such an amazing story.
| smileintothechaos chapter 3 . 5/7/2013
holy shit kagome totally kicks ass
| smileintothechaos chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
great opening chapter!
| Althea M chapter 86 . 5/2/2013
I had the opportunity to read your finished product, ‘The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse’, and it was thrilling. I particularly enjoyed the fact that you not only aged Kagome, but you also trained her as a combatant. So, although she was thrust into the circumstances as reflected in the anime and manga, she was not some helpless teen trying to stay out of harm’s way. You made her quite ‘kickass’ in fact. She had skill, confidence, and fire. She tamed a dog without breaking its spirit. And the benefits of that were superb. She was a strong, compassionate, passionate woman.
I liked how you brought the brothers together to form an alliance, sorting through some of the nasties of Inuyasha’s childhood past. There are still secrets there. I would love to see short stories of the time after the well closed and Inuyasha starting his ‘single’ life as heir to the Western Lands. But time travel always gives me a headache, so, maybe not.
I just want to end with telling you that you did a fabulous job on this story. Unlike others, I did not have to ride it out chapter by chapter, but given its ‘un-put-down-ability’ I would have gladly ridden this story train.
| Lady Moiraina chapter 5 . 4/3/2013
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| La Bella Figura chapter 86 . 2/18/2013
I followed this story as it was published all those years ago. And here I am at age 22, five years after the final update, with tears leaking out of my eyes just as strongly as the first time I read this. I adore this fanfiction more than I can possibly say- it's perfection. There are no other words to describe it.
| DeathsQueen26 chapter 86 . 2/15/2013
cried, laughed, cried, some more, cried some more, Laughed some more and then laughed and then cried a very good story. I love it!
| fieldccl chapter 86 . 2/13/2013
Just spent the whole night reading the last chapters, simply because I couldn't bring myself to sleep before reading it all. And, oh boy... What a marvelous story. I'm overwhelmed with the awesomeness of the tale you have created - to the point where I can't pick between the original InuYasha and your fanfic. I feel obligated to thank you for the three years of work you put into it, for it has brought me incredible joy. I shall dream of the happy endings for weeks to come, knowing they were extremely deserved.
Another significant point: your writing is beautiful. I have no other words to describe it; the way you paint masterpieces with words is magnificent.
And... I guess that's all. I'll really miss all the amazing characters you have created. This humble reader thanks immensely for the shared tale. Farewell, Fenik.
| Miranda chapter 86 . 2/12/2013
I must say, this is by far one of the best fan fictions I've ever read! I'm so sad that it's over I honestly have no idea what I'm going to do with my spare time now.. hehehe but some things confused me.
It says that after their first "final battle" with Naraku that Kagome was sent back to her time and the well closed for good. What happened to that Kagome? Did she have the same life span of a normal human or did she live on? Because if Rin is still very alive after a couple centuries because of her mating with Sesshomaru wouldn't the original Kagome also had an extended life span? Or was that cut off due to time difference and all that jazz?
Also, would history repeat itself all over again for the younger InuYasha gang? Meaning he goes crazy from being separated from Kagome and they build up this entire plan to introduce Kagome back to him in 500 years, or does it just stop there?
All useless questions really but they've been nagging at me! haha
| Kylila Kurosuki chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
ok this is really long but i dont care
| BloodyKagome chapter 86 . 12/24/2012
No doubt one of my favorite stories! pure awesomeness