Reviews for The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse
framedlightning chapter 1 . 11/22
Rereading and I can't believe it's been almost 10 years since my first read through! I needed some BAMF Kagome back in my life :)
coolishable chapter 19 . 10/11
The amount of plot holes in this story at this point are unreal. I know time-travel is hard to do and to make coherent, but if your going with that as your setting... at least try? It feels like its only a thing because the author wanted the love-triangle with 2 Inuyashas, because every other part of the story/plot is looking like swiss fucking cheese by this point. This is a rough one because I liked the characterization and dialogue and stuff to this point. But I can't really justify reading 700,000 words of a retread of the canon plot with random older Inuyasha fan-service thrown in intermittently since it's obvious now no real thought has been put into the greater story outside of thinking that idea is hot to the author.
Mal chapter 86 . 7/24
This is my third reread of this, and damn. It just gets better each time. :D
Guest chapter 7 . 7/20
Found this story earlier, and now I can’t stop reading it!
Smr1821 chapter 86 . 10/5/2021
Omg. I loved this story. Bit sad kags was forced to be ordinary but I'm glad she delt with it. Honestly this is now one of my favorites.
stranger1999 chapter 86 . 2/3/2021
This story was nothing short of a rollercoaster and I enjoyed the ride immensely!I loved your twist in canon and your depiction of every character!
Kagomes characterization was especially good and I loved you making her a badass in her own right. it's nothing short of what she deserves!
great job!
Bleudome chapter 49 . 1/18/2021
I had to leave a comment. This is my second time reading this fic and I love it even more the second time around. I just like how there is a solid relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome and that there is more to her here. She always seemed so weak in the main story either needing to be saved or being compared to Kikyo.

This Kagome is fiery and well equipped to deal with the troubles ahead of her. She rises to challenges, fights to be stronger, but has emotions during times of duress and reacts how I wished she had reacted in the anime. I never liked Inuyasha being so torn between the two of them, it drove me insane.

But overall, good story, you use a lot of the main anime and manga plot, but I like the differences in how each character reacts and/or behaves to the situations around them that makes it feel like an older more adult pair of my favorite anime.
Guest chapter 86 . 11/25/2020
Just read your story for the first time. I'm absolutely blown away. Thank you for the adventure :)
Gicu2 chapter 68 . 10/9/2020
What happened to Kagome's battle-sight? She should have seen it coming.
Gicu2 chapter 53 . 10/7/2020
This story is excellent! I am really enraptured by it!
Gicu2 chapter 16 . 9/30/2020
Chapter 16 has a lot of interesting tidbits. I personally loved the relational insights. Specifically, InuYasha explaining his past relationship with Kikyou to a guarded Kagome. Not sure she's buying it though (I wouldn't either)! The more I read this story, the more I like it! I never thought the anime even attempted to reveal InuYasha's thoughts on this. I'll say it again, "I wish this were canon."
Gicu2 chapter 15 . 9/30/2020
Great chapter. I wonder how this is going to turn out? Is SJ InuYasha going to drop her for Kikyou until the Jewel is complete or mate with her? Will Yashita tell the pup who he is? What battle are they 21st century Demons preparing her for?
Gicu2 chapter 14 . 9/30/2020
I am really enjoying this story. I don't know why I avoided it for so long. I guess the 80 plus chapters and the thumbnail were discouraging. However, this is a very interesting and novel FanFic. There are many tender and hilarious moments that every fan will enjoy. The author is also very good at building the levels of angst and romance without sacrificing good storytelling. Kudos! In many ways, I wish it were canon.
Gicu2 chapter 13 . 9/29/2020
Whoa! This is so awesome!
Gicu2 chapter 10 . 9/29/2020
Wow. I wish that had been canon.
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