Reviews for Long Time No See |
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![]() ![]() Ugh, they played us like a damn fiddle I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great. The twist got me good, and then I read the story again and I loved it even more. Awesome job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is brilliant short story. I will try to avoid spoiling it, so I will say that at first it was very painful for me to read it. It is masterfully written, just the story looked so bleak I felt I would drop it. But as I finished I sat completely dumbstruck. And then immediately read it again, madly laughing. Holy shit, the author got me. Totally a masterpiece 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brought a grin to my face, too. Appreciate it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I WAS SO CONFUSED ON THE HUSBAND AND WIFE THING IN THE END BUT THEN I READ THE REVIEWS AND GOT IT OMFMGMF I LOVED THE TWIST :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, nice twist. Somehow though, I saw that twist coming for miles; but maybe that's just me. Keep narrating, Ranma-sensei |
![]() ![]() ![]() I admit, the twist got me the first time around. Wonderful story and a terrific demonstration of the use of ambiguity and assumption. You conveyed a great amount of subtle hints and details about their lives with just a small amount of dialogue, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, I was sooo slow to catch on that Asuka and Shinji were just pretending / putting up a magnificent act pretending that they hadn't seen each other for almost 10 years... I was feeling slightly sad for the possible romance between Asuka and Shinji, and once I'd lost all hope, this bombshell was dropped - Good Story, I like nostalgia among characters :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() TOTALLY ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! |
![]() ![]() Fantastic story! You had me fooled! |
![]() ![]() Loved this..absolutely loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. I was completely fooled, the whole way through. Loved the ending-sweet moments between Asuka and Shinji always warm my heart. A brilliant oneshot. That aside... I can't wait until you start writing more stuff again. I love your work, I really do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. This is such a nice fanfic (thought you put it in the wrong catagory because it should be under romance not humor). It is going in my favorite stories section. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I can often get a general idea of likely directions a story can go. It's rare that a twist is something I can't possibly see coming, but you did it here. Congratulations. |