Reviews for Long Time No See
Iino chapter 1 . 7/11/2022
Ugh, they played us like a damn fiddle

I love it
Humseal chapter 1 . 9/4/2021
Good
YourBlandestNightmare chapter 1 . 3/23/2021
This was great. The twist got me good, and then I read the story again and I loved it even more. Awesome job.
Akomis chapter 1 . 3/5/2021
This is brilliant short story. I will try to avoid spoiling it, so I will say that at first it was very painful for me to read it. It is masterfully written, just the story looked so bleak I felt I would drop it. But as I finished I sat completely dumbstruck. And then immediately read it again, madly laughing. Holy shit, the author got me. Totally a masterpiece 10/10
Dentro del Infinito chapter 1 . 1/24/2020
Brought a grin to my face, too. Appreciate it.
PandaDawgBE chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
I WAS SO CONFUSED ON THE HUSBAND AND WIFE THING IN THE END BUT THEN I READ THE REVIEWS AND GOT IT OMFMGMF I LOVED THE TWIST :)
Ranma-sensei chapter 1 . 6/17/2016
Heh, nice twist. Somehow though, I saw that twist coming for miles; but maybe that's just me.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei
Panther2G chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
I admit, the twist got me the first time around. Wonderful story and a terrific demonstration of the use of ambiguity and assumption. You conveyed a great amount of subtle hints and details about their lives with just a small amount of dialogue, too.
Western-Otaku chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
OMG, I was sooo slow to catch on that Asuka and Shinji were just pretending / putting up a magnificent act pretending that they hadn't seen each other for almost 10 years...

I was feeling slightly sad for the possible romance between Asuka and Shinji, and once I'd lost all hope, this bombshell was dropped - Good Story, I like nostalgia among characters :)
roughstar333 chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
TOTALLY ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!
Amsim chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Fantastic story! You had me fooled!
Amsim chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Loved this..absolutely loved it.
Dragonjek chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Awesome. I was completely fooled, the whole way through. Loved the ending-sweet moments between Asuka and Shinji always warm my heart. A brilliant oneshot.

That aside... I can't wait until you start writing more stuff again. I love your work, I really do.
Asukaforever92 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Love this story. This is such a nice fanfic (thought you put it in the wrong catagory because it should be under romance not humor). It is going in my favorite stories section.
justbehappydammit chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Wow. I can often get a general idea of likely directions a story can go. It's rare that a twist is something I can't possibly see coming, but you did it here. Congratulations.
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