Reviews for The Trials of the Pendant 1: The PKMN Super Bowl
Justin chapter 5 . 4/1/2012
Wtf? Dragonite is the strongest he gets angry he could kill celebi.
neogirl7900 chapter 9 . 4/22/2006

If Celebi hurt Mew too much, wouldn't it be Celebi who was disqualified and not Mew?

Oh well.

Keep it up!

neogirl7900 chapter 8 . 4/14/2006
I know I know! -jumps up and down raising her hand- She's pregnant! I knew that the second it said she wasn't feeling well but couldn't find any symtomps of an illness!

Once again, Mewtwo and Mew seemed a little too human for my liking, but oh well. To me Mew seems more like a little girl than a grown-up old enough to get married(and have kids...), and Mewtwo is acting kinda too nice. But yah...

Oh... poor Celebi:( That was sad.

I liked this chapter more than the battle chapters. It's shoujo-y! Yay!

Keep it up!

neogirl7900 chapter 7 . 4/13/2006
Oh, gosh! I saw there was a sequel to this and I thought, "Hey, I never finished reading the first one!" Since I have some other fics to keep up with as well, I'll hopefully read a chapter a day...

Ha ha, ha, ha ha ha-cough- Um, sorry. Uh, ignore my laughing, it's um... -laughcough- Uh, this cold is REALLY annoying...

Um, yah. Sorry, I found it a bit... OOC... Mewtwo and Mew... married... it just seemed too... human... and I like Mewtwo better all dark-ish... not married...

Well, keep it up!

ally ally oxenfree chapter 11 . 10/3/2005
Hmm interesting... ;)
ally ally oxenfree chapter 10 . 9/18/2005
(-stab-) UPDATE!
dinolover9999 chapter 9 . 9/16/2005
I've read this on that other sight. *Celebi impression* It will be long I predict. I won't give it away though. ;)
ally ally oxenfree chapter 9 . 9/15/2005
(GLOMP) You updated! (happy)

Mewtwo rules.
pokemongirl2523 chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
I can't wait to read the rest!
neogirl7900 chapter 6 . 8/4/2005
I read the last chappie yesterday but this website was being bad and would not let me submit my review.

Very good. I'm excited. The only thing is, why do Mewtwo and Mew have to win in order to save the world? Oh, well, I like how this is based ENTIRELY on the games. Also, try to get in more than just the battles. Battles are good, but you shouldn't overdo it. Each chapter is basically just a battle and a brief reflection or conversation from the Pokemon.

Keep it up!

neogirl7900 chapter 4 . 7/11/2005
Hmm... interesting.

"Woah! I can tell that they have their pride on the line! There's definately gonna be no backing down in this match!"

That was sorta OOC for Mewtwo, but I can tell you've chosen to write him as you would have imagined him in the game, and Mewtwo is very hard to write.

Mistakened? That's mistaken, though it's not a huge deal.

Also, if the matches are always random, you might want to make it so that it's more than just the same type battling.

Keep it up! I'm liking this!

chyp chapter 2 . 7/2/2005
chyp chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
neogirl7900 chapter 2 . 7/1/2005
Cool. The only thing I'd like to point out is that if this took place in the Pokemon world, they wouldn't call it the gold/silver/crystal or red/blue/yellow. They MIGHT call it Johto and Kanto.
neogirl7900 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Interesting idea, I'm looking forward to more. Not much else to say.