|Reviews for Potential in Smallville|
| MysticWolf1 chapter 10 . 9/30/2008
I am always on the lookout for good Buffyverse/Smallville crossovers, and there were many thing I enjoyed about this story.
I loved the detail you went into involving Chloe's life at the council. Your oc slayers were very well written, and your knowledge of both Buffy and Smallville was very apparent.
I also enjoyed the little bit of Chlark moments, but I felt cheated at the end when you paired him with Lois. I am not against Clois, but in this fic it just felt like Chloe was getting cheated out; sort of the way canon Smallville has done with the Chlark relationship, always having Chloe come in second to Lana, and now you did it in here with Lois. I was disappointed.
I also think it would have been cool to have some of the slayers witness Clark use his abilities. They may think he was a demon or a hell God though. Willow at least would have sensed something about Clark, but you barely even touched on Willow's time in Smallville.
| JediClaire chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
| Inscriffany chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Just re-reading so I'm not lost on the sequel:-) A couple things...I really like this fic; you set things up very nicely. Constructive criticism: In dialogue, it can get kind of dull to see "..." Giles said. "..." Buffy said. "..." Willow said. Also, there were a few moments when something didn't seem to flow quite right within the story. Other than that, excellent work!
| wordoftruthhunter26 chapter 10 . 11/21/2005
i like this universe well thought out. but you do have some missing words. your grammer is good tho. i can't wait till the next story comes out. please keep writing.
| Childe at Heart chapter 10 . 11/14/2005
great story. can't wait for the sequel! I like that bit about willow seeing the blood covering the town. mm, don't really have any suggestions for the next story. but, please write it soon!
| Theory chapter 10 . 11/14/2005
Kick ass story, everything rocked and i can wait for the sequal but plz dont dumb down Clarks power if you feature them, i really hate it when the Slayer turn into Supergirl, btw Chloe has an up on clark, superman is weak against magic!
| HippoKrys chapter 10 . 11/13/2005
That was a good chapte and i can't wait for the sequel! :)
| Ant Crown chapter 10 . 11/12/2005
*Gives a standing ovation
| MintChocolate5 chapter 10 . 11/12/2005
Yeah! Completed! Congrats and a job well done. As for a sequel, I really like the idea of Clark dating a demonGirl who is out to kill him. And since Willow is there...oh, the fun.
Once again, you've done such a fantastic job on this story. Can't wait for the sequel.
| Korasei chapter 10 . 11/11/2005
I'm still here. Still enjoying your story. Looking forward to Guardians. RL just getting to me. Stories like yours help a lot. Thank You.
| encore28 chapter 10 . 11/11/2005
Wow, I really love this story!
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed it before, but it definitely deserves a review. I love how you approached this, and the idea was great! Woo!
I can't wait until the sequel, so chop chop! Get on that!
About the title... I know this is probably corny, but how about Heroes of the Night?
Feel free to ignore it and walk away laughing merrily at the rediculous suggestion.
Also, about the pairing. I am seriously biased, because I'm a big Lois/Clark fan, but I would love to see them in this story.
But the idea of Clark dating a demon unwittingly? Also a lot of potential. Hey, you're the author, it's up to you.
Great stuff! Can't wait until the sequel!
| Mist of Rainbows chapter 9 . 11/3/2005
An interesting take on telling Lois, it's always good to blame the cults. Keep up with the writing please.
| Ant Crown chapter 9 . 11/3/2005
Good some Angel. Want Lois/Clark. Good all around.
| Shallow-Misha chapter 9 . 11/3/2005
HEY! I really liked this chapter. I can't wait until the next chapter! I wish I could help with ideas but I'm all out. For some reason my brain is taking a long break.
| stcobb chapter 9 . 11/3/2005
I want cookies! Seemed kind of rushed but good.