Reviews for Capsized
darkangledwarrior91 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
"He is the water that keeps you alive, yet threatens to drown you." that was my fav. part... this is a really deep poem...u got their character down i think...i wonder if sasuke really feels that way though...poor lil sasuke...really good
Kitsune no Yuuki chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
beautiful, pure genius, i love the format. bravo!
JustGravity chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Hm...This is really complex and simple at the same time, which actually kind of makes it confusing to understand a little. Meaning it's another piece of genius. The parts in italics really seemed to get to me for some reason...
potato3 chapter 1 . 6/30/2005

Woot! Thank you! I love your abtract-ish creative-ness. This was amazingly cool. Happy birthday to me...
toomanypickles chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Ooh, that was cool! The spacing and arrangement (I guess) was very neat. I'm sure there's a proper word for that, but I can't remember it.

You write neat poetry.
thefuturefreaksmeout chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Oh, so beautiful.
ElasticBobaTurtle chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Hmm. Very interesting. I like it! -
Hakanaki chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
Ohh! This is pretty. I likes it. Happy belated b-day, KnO! _! I can't really tell who it's about, but maybe that's just me.

This reminds me alot of the stuff I read on fictionpress, actually. But I really like it _