Reviews for Why hold back?
doc boy chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Beautiful and incredible. I was really afraid for them a few times. I thought the ending was sweet and touching. Though I hoped she would have kissed him on the lips and they would become a couple but this was pretty good. Fine work my friend, fine work
warzonecall chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
Love the story! You should write more like this, very good.
Celestic Sapphire chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Loved the story!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
I hate the fact that May literally did everything, you made Ash seem so helpless this fanfic
IceMaster1928 chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Bravo nice ending I really like it you should make the sequel for this story it needs it
Mega Charizard X chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Wow good story.
BlakeMaster10 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
*Sigh* I was just walking down memory road after reading TlSouldude's story 'Insane Critic' his 60th chapter just came out at the time I'm typing this but it's a review (by his brother) about a story that got them to make fanfictions and how good it was and I left a review to him telling him how this was the first story I ever read on fanfiction and how this story prompted me to write my pokemon fanfiction (which I've tooken down for it being to confusing) actually this fanfiction got me into fanfiction altogether. I still can't believe this was the first one I ever read and I've read a LOT over the years since this story (given that I've read fanfiction everyday since this and I was about 10 when I read this and I'm 14 years old now) *sigh* where do the years go...
imafangirlforever chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Varun51194 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Very good.
XyKPfan chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Aww! I loved this fic! So much, I'm gonna add it to my Alets and possibly my faves. Great job! I have to admit, at first, it was a little hard to read, but I figured it out. Looking forward to more of your works!
Captainof10 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
awesome story! Write a sequel please!
haru-teri22 chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
there were a few grammar problems that bugged me...

but it's okay...

the end was what really got me :]

cuz it was so cute!

you really made this FF like the real episodes (
reylynners chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Yeah! its great!
Emiya Shirou chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Its not written like a script. only leaves a blank line every time u manually go to the next line in Word.

So if you want to prevent this dont press Enter all the time just write on :P
pookie-poo chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
Great story luved it
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