|Reviews for Destiny's Past|
| Anghammarad chapter 6 . 7/7/2005
i think this is a really cool story! for once ron is holding up his end and then some! keep writing it can only get better and have a nice day.
| eckles chapter 5 . 7/4/2005
I'm truly enjoying the development of this story, JonathonWolf.
In most of FanFic's I've read where Ron wakes up and comes to the conclusion that he needs to become a better fighter to help KP, the author has him flying off to Japan. In this instance Master Sensai advises Ron to train in America.
I like the introduction of Bonnie into the story, but I have to admit I am a slightly bias person where relationships with Ron Stoppable is concerned and I will always support the whole 'KP/RS'-thing. Though I have to admit - I love rivalry stories for the blonde Monkey Master.
On a personal note I would love to see what happens if Kim get's jealous of the time and friendship Ron spends with Bonnie in teaching her the basic's of self defence, and she comes to the conclusion that Ron is crushing on Bon-Bon, or that Bonnie is crushing on him. The whole 'Kimness' kicks in (afterall, kimmy don't like sharing with anyone ;-)...LOL), when she over hears Bonnie gush and brag to the other girls on the squad of Ron's physique (maybe get Tara interested in Ron again - hint, hint LOL). Kim comes to the conclusion that Bonnie and Ron must not happen!
Then later on in the story Yori can show up to see how Ron is going in his training ;-)...LOL.
Wanna see more soon!
| Darkcloudalpha chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Interesting so does this there many other types of mystical animal powers out there. I gues monkeys can't have all the fun. Please update soon.
| Egohan chapter 5 . 7/1/2005
good story i like how you made ron still him self but tring to better him self as far has pairing i would not mind a bon/ron or a kim/ron but i lean more so bon/ron or any other pairing be sides kim it is not that i don't like her it is just i like odd pairings more so then the norm or the highly used ones it keeps things fresh i await your next update
| demon-sword chapter 5 . 7/1/2005
nice update. it seems bonnie does hav a good side afterall.
| jarmitc2032 chapter 4 . 6/29/2005
I love your story, must see more. Liked the fact that you used your username in the story. Hope this is not becoming a Ron/Bonnie story. Would love to see a Kim/Ron story, but its not my story.
| Brimmstone chapter 4 . 6/29/2005
Great story. Looking forward to more.
| Harper loves Alex chapter 2 . 6/29/2005
this is hot keep going
| demon-sword chapter 4 . 6/29/2005
nice seeing how this is goin. it would be cool to see ron kicking bad guy ass. i also think that it should be a kim/ron fic instead of a bonnie/ron fic because ron is doing this train to help out kim. its cool that ron is just kicking ass and acting cool.
| Kid Eternity chapter 4 . 6/29/2005
I'm waiting for a new story from you, anyway I hope that Ron woudn't get together with Bonnie, it would be a bad mix.
| kemiztri chapter 4 . 6/28/2005
I'm liking it so far. The writing is great, and the concept has a nice spin to it. I mean, Ron harnessing his monkey powers to be able to help Kim out more during missions is nothing new. But having a werewolf teach Ron while pretending his training sessions are part of comm. service is definitely new. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this will lead to.
Quick question: Will this fic stay Bonnie/Ron? Or will it become Kim/Ron? I'm all for Kim/Ron, but if you play this thing right, which you seem to be doing if ch. 4 is any indication, then you might just convince me that B/R is an...*okay* pairing.
I know you just posted 4 chapters, but please update as soon as you can with ch.5 (or more).