Reviews for Breathing
IsolinaBlack chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
Aw, kawaii.

I do wonder what's gonna happen when Kagome finds him there, though. xD
beaner93 chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Poor Yasha! Being a human is really hard for him!
Sparkly Blue chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
Aw! How cute! :)
DarkInuHanyou chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Aw, so cute!
kasandra16 chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
aww...inuyasha is so sweet when he's human!
kagome2 chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
ur summary was lame but somehow i was drawn 2 it
KC Whitestar chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
awe fluff_ i loved it Keep up the great work
luvangel-muzikbaby chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
20FacesChizu chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Hey! A new story idea! When was the last time that happened? Hehe! I like lots! Will you check out my stuff PWETTY PWEASE?
Colhan3000 chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
The ending was a bit of a let down, you could have put a lot more at the end.
faberryjuice chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Really good, so sweet
starpana chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
(is that the end?)

i'll like it. it was good
Eilan-san chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
It was very sweet, and as I love that song, I thought the uses of the lyrics in the story were very well used.

Something maybe for you to improve on: the scenario has a lot of potential, but when the plot is so simple, you can take that as an opportunity to do a real character study and deepen the reader's understanding of the characters.

Just a thought. And I still think you're the best Beta-Reader ever. :o)
kagomes pup chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Ok good and I want more.
BeachGirlie chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Bravo! I think you portrayed human Inuyasha very well. A well written and very cute one-shot.
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