|Reviews for Black Sabbath|
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 9 . 9/16/2012
Yaaay how cute Chrono and Rosette are finally together. Thought they'll have some problems in the future form certain person's who'd want them dead... well good thing Chrono is immortal now :D. I really enjoyed reading this fic.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 8 . 9/16/2012
Talk about hell, but Pandemonium is so right, there's no better punishment than the pain of the heart and guilt. Well being physical tortured isn't fun either. I just feel so sorry for Chrono, he finally got his body back, only to see Rosette dying on him.
At least Joshua snapped out of his state and accepting his feelings for Az and a good thing that he's no idiot to be fooled by a fake.
I really hope that Chrono and Rosette will be together in some way.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 7 . 9/16/2012
Yaay they'll finally ready to save Chrono and Rosette is starting to become herself again... well that was very easy to snap her back XD.
Joshua's love problems really are similar to Chrono's, except Chrono was smarter than Joshua and got over it after Rosette talked sense into him. Az should do the same thing. Slap him awake, tell him he's no god, that it's not his fault and that he has to steady himself. he's a man right? Then he should act like one! Something along that line :3
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 9/16/2012
I feel so sorry for Rosette, not being able to see or save Chrono and everyone else tries to find a way to save him. At least all the puzzle have been put into their places., only they have to find a way to save Chrono.
Yaay for Satella's return, maybe she'll be able to snap Rosette out of her emo state.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
NOO Chrono! They can't kill him! Can't they just try soul dive and get rid of Crayak?
Lucifer and Gabriel really have something to explain and how come the others aren't that shocked to see a devil and an angel out of nowhere?
I really enjoyed reading the chapter :D
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 9/16/2012
Aww they made up yaay. Rosette and Chrono kissing was my fav part of the chapter... or the part where they decided to be... life partners... or idk how else I should call it... the way a demon proposes? anyway it's soo cute :D
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
For a sec I thought Duffau didn't contacted the Magdale order because of his pride as a pursuer and his 'dislike' for the Magdale order and Chrono. That would have been funny.
What connection does Chrono has with Crayak? every time I try to imagine I only get to see a funny puppet show in my head. XD and I thought Chrono was about to tickle Rosette. I am sure she had the same thing in mind as me.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Ohh interesting, I wonder who this Crayak fellow is and why does he/ she knows about Chrono? Does Aion knows about this fellow? I get the feeling as if Chrono had part of his memories sealed... and why did Crayak called Chrono the son of destruction, yeah I know he's very powerful and known as the slayer of 100... but why did he/ she gave Chrono such a nickname? I am soo curious. :3
| Mitsuye-san chapter 9 . 8/26/2012
This is a great story, one of the best I've read about Chrono Crusade.
Great job on this story, it was practically amazing!
| Kintora chapter 9 . 12/3/2011
I think this is the first, really kickass Chrono Crusade story I've read that's ACTUALLY COMPLETED. YOU ROCK.
I enjoyed this very much! Excellent work!
| FadingNoctis chapter 9 . 5/14/2011
Amazing! I just read the whole thing these past two days and enjoyed every chapter of it! (Okay. Maybe that's not true. Chapter 6 and 7 were depressing.)
This is an excellant example of a fanfic that incorporates both Anime and Manga plotlines without overbearing. Nice work. :)
I felt that the ending felt really well within your storyline; Rosette and Chrno were able to live for eternity together. So sweet. -
Amazing. Keep it iup. :)
| Kiki Lefevre chapter 9 . 12/20/2010
I love you.
I freaking LOVE you.
I may have stayed up way too late reading this in between working on my portfolio (Ehehehe, all-nighter please?) but damn, was it worth it. THIS is the kind of ending the anime/manga should have had. I can't stand that they were so... perfect, close, whatever floats your boat, and they ended up dying. Together or not, they died without us getting any clue as to what may have happened after.
With characters so obviously in love, you just DON'T do that.
Your ending: Perfect. In the manga/Anime or 'your' continuity, Rosette would have died anyway due to her shortened life and Chrono would have died with her or ended up staying alive, kind of like how he had with Mary. It only makes sense for her to return as an angel with him having stayed alive because I doubt that devils/demons, no matter how much good they have done, can go to heaven. Which would mean that if he died, they'd be separated.
The story was amazingly written as well, even the 1920's slang was there. (I can't understand the 'Jake' one though. I mean, just say OK. 'Jake' doesn't really make any sense...) Possessive Chrono is pretty awesome too. (Even better, the fact that I'm trying to picture a twelve year old acting like that... It seems so out of character, I giggled.) All the characters were really well-portrayed and interacted well with one another and your plot. Oh, the plot was also really well-done. Whether it took a long time to plan it out, or if it was spur of the moment, it really fit the story and managed to tie up a lot of loose ends and explain things pretty well.
I also enjoyed that it was still essentially a tragedy in some cases, which follows the original story, but it still ended happily. There is sorrow AND happiness in the world, it's an undeniable fact. A lot of people tend to forget that and while it isn't 'nice' to have tragedy in a story, it is a nice slap of realism and a good way to contrast and accent the happy parts. (Not to mention, who doesn't like a well-done bittersweet scene every once in a while?)
I thought Joshua's thoughts during the beginning of the Fiore thing were a little not-crazy-enough, since he still had Chrono's horns and was still kind of messed-up in the head. (You barely notice it though. I'm just saying.)
There were a few times it was Angle instead of Angel. Just a typo, doesn't bother the reading too much, but you know, it just one of those things that could really change the story. (If taken literally of course)
Welp, I think my 'review' is done. Time for me to pipe down.
Oh Applesauce, I hope this isn't too long or rant-y. My extra opinions have a habit of sneaking into these things.
Well, whatever, keep up the writing, it's amazing.
| LordofAmus chapter 9 . 12/15/2010
OMG I love your story. I was so sad at the end of the eighth chapter. Poor Chrono. I loved how you added romance and your own ideas of demons and stuff. It was really great. I loved it! *favorite story and author*
| Fred And George Weasley's Girl chapter 9 . 4/27/2009
i really love this story i read it a coulpe of times and i keep forgeting to comment it would be good to make a sequal
| Angel Fantasy chapter 9 . 2/7/2009
This story was SO beautiful! I loved it!
Please write a sequel of it! Please, please please please please please!