Great story!

I am a fan of this story and your writing overall, however, this chapter just seems unnecessary and overboard. It is basically a rehash of other times Harry has been injured just with a new cause. It doesn't add anything to the story.

Wow! I didn’t expect a heart attack! Great idea, that guy is a walking coronary.
I love that Harry was upset to discover he was upset that Vernon was dead, and upset that he thought of not saving him. Very realistic.

Great series, I hated to see it end. Good writing will check out authors other other stories
and look forward to seeing more of his works.

I’m glad this was added. I felt the consequences for these two was missing.

Excellent story

An enchantment on Hermione again? Nope. Just teenage brain damage.

Hermione’s behavior is certainly suspicious. Teenagers behave strangely on a regular basis, but considering the way she was forced to behave in the previous story…definitely suspicious.

I’m glad Harry came back to his art.

Adding an obsession with James to her jealousy of Lily was an interesting ingredient explaining her treatment of Harry.

Thanks!

A little thoughtless and selfish to attack Harry verbally as soon as they see him. Let's undo the healing asap. But then adolescents are a bit childish and irrational I suppose. Maybe they just didn't realize the depth and seriousness of his state. And most people are a bit self centered. This just seemed somewhat extreme to berate him and be all about me me me instead of rejoicing at his recovery from the brink of insanity or suicide. Interesting story. Thanks.

If the protection on Harry expires on his 17th birthday in a few weeks what's the point of his being at the Dursley's? Leave that toxic environment and those toxic people at once. Don't be a dunderhead! Thanks for a fantastic story!
Oh, and yes, Tonks was nuts to try her hopeless and wasted psycho treatment of Petunia and Dudley at tremendously inhumane expense to Harry. Then, after she acknowledged her error, she heaped more coals on the fire by stupidly ruining the party with yet another doomed gesture of extreme idiocy by forcing the invitation. Poor, poor Harry, still suffering thoughtlessness and cruelty now at the hands of his so called friend even if her intentions were supposedly good. Makes for an interesting story though.

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I really loved this story!