|Reviews for Love Hina: Evil Edition|
| trainman7616 chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
This Was Epic! 8 hope there is more to come.
| DarianMograin chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Usually when I find a story I don't like I just ignore it and move on, but I had to say this: Don't waste your time with this story.
The writing style is just awful and the character bashing is very childish and immature. I gave up after one chapter. I really don't like to flame people but this looks like it was written by a grade-schooler.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This fanfic sucks bad!
| mnementh2000 chapter 8 . 7/27/2012
I love the Omake! Psychological warfare FTW! This is certainly a fun fic, and I like the fact that Kei is more assertive and confident, as well as the fact that Naru does NOT get together with him. I really dislike how she treated him in the manga and anime, only for them to end up getting married, with her continuing to abuse him. Besides, she really isn't that attractive - Tsuruko and Motoko take that prize hands-down, followed by the others. Likewise, Sara was a total witch in the series, so she needs a little REEDUCATION. :D
| Maxmanatarms chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
It hurts to story
| Ashen Author chapter 6 . 7/17/2012
i like this story, but you should add Naru-bashing to the tag because that's what this is. Also, are you going to use Amalla? Another interesting idea, we find out near the end that Naru has a step-sister named Mei, could you make her show up? She could be a mini-Naru, or they could be completely different, and it would be cool either way
| iceland chapter 9 . 2/8/2012
it is a good story to read and like how naru is treated by everyone. very funny to read whats happens.
| Poisontomb chapter 10 . 4/15/2010
i really like this story. i look foward to ur next installment
| Negima-Roxas chapter 10 . 2/17/2009
Piss shinobu off, and its one way to hell!
| Negima-Roxas chapter 9 . 2/17/2009
Another sick demented awesomeness there BZ7!
Although the omake of the "Piece of him" thing is making me laugh like hell.
Add some Left 4 Dead references here, like Sara and Naru turning into a Witch and tries to decapitate the crap out of Keitaro and the other Hina girls shoot the hell out of them with well, plastic bullets to put them in pain.
Another awesome work.
| Negima-Roxas chapter 8 . 2/17/2009
Sick, demented fucks as they are! I LOVE IT!
Shinobu was hellishly scary there, suggesting the three suggestions with an A positive.
So much for Sara being nice. I like her, but I like Mei more.
Sara is a good loli sometimes, lol.
Awesome fic, Naru bashing and Sara bashing are too cool.
| HiroshimaNagasaki chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
About the scene with Naru in the onsen.
Man, it just doesn't work that way. Poor girl will have her hands shaking for a week. Needless to say she will not stay in Hinata any longer, and if she will stay it'll be psychological torture for her.
That is how you torture people and break them, not the way you just demand apologies.
| Kanako lover chapter 10 . 2/12/2008
You must update this. Naru bashing at its best. I also like how Keitaro finally realizes that Kanako is the one for him and not the other floozies around him. Adding Mtoko's older sister takes some seriosu balls.
| kidcrud chapter 10 . 1/10/2008
| Lord Morozco chapter 3 . 10/8/2007
The story is great...but I take back the Omen comment. He's just tough now...not evil...well...borderline at least...