Reviews for Remove the Barrier
OnceaSuperWhoLockian chapter 2 . 1/27/2006
hey, this is pretty good but its a little confusing. there needs to be a little more explaination and some more fluff because the story keeps jumping around and really makes little sense right now. But the plot line is very good, so i cant wait to read more.
marieney.pervis chapter 2 . 9/5/2005
please update soon! The part with the little karate was hilarious!
apocalypse09 chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
um, k, the avril was kinda random.
Little TinkerBell Girl chapter 2 . 7/22/2005
please update soon
idonrlycarenemore chapter 2 . 7/19/2005
heyhey, i no im being kinda, weird reviewing my own story, but i wud love it if yall'd review, please, and much love to Mrs. Nikki Slater for reviewing, and cont pls!P.S, give me constructive critisism, not just OMG! Nice story! take the time 2 review! Thnxs 4 listening, I really love yall! Ackee and saltfish-Anya
Querida1605 chapter 2 . 7/18/2005
why didnt suze push cee out of the way? oh well, maybe there will be some fluff with jesse...update soon please
AshlalaSparxx chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
Why is Paul ALWAYS seen as evil?

He's simply misunderstood!

But I definitely wanna see what happens now that he's in her room, continue!
Querida1605 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
that was so great, i love it please update soon please