| Reviews for This Time Around |
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   Vishw chapter 22 . 3/6 Apart from the writer's bias against Hinata, this was a good read till it lasted... |
| Vishw chapter 21 . 3/6 Isn't Kin supposed to use sound genjutsu? On that note, heh, how exactly did Haku manage to infiltrate Sound? And to be honest, it's rather hard to believe Haku taking on such a dangerous mission on a say-so from a couple of strangers who were his supposed enemies. Unless they told him at least the partial truth, though convincing him is another matter entirely. |
| Vishw chapter 20 . 3/6 Lying to Kakashi is definitely going to come back and bite them in the ass... |
| Vishw chapter 18 . 3/6 Well, it 'was' rather suspicious that Naruto called Kin 'pretty'. Heh. |
| Vishw chapter 1 . 3/6 Why use dobe but not teme? |
| DBoblivion chapter 5 . 2/18 Guy's you realise this was pubished and likely planned in 2005 right? your points about the actual events and expanded characterization weren't known back then |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/13/2024 I find it very hard to believe that Mikoto can look at Naruto and only see the Fox, considering she was best friends with his mother... |
| Child of Dreams chapter 3 . 3/24/2024 Didn't Shisui commit suicide? |
| Child of Dreams chapter 2 . 3/24/2024 Considering Mikoto was supposed to be Naruto's mother's best friend, I find it very difficult to believe that she can look at Naruto and only see the bloody Fox. |
| lukeanimelover chapter 4 . 2/1/2024 Have you even watched naruto or is this a whole ass AU? Cause it seems to me that you just watched some clips and read some fanfics and then jumped right into it without even watching any of the actual bloody show. |
| Aurora rura- Aura chapter 2 . 1/31/2024 I love it but Mikoto ( Her real name) Would love it if Sasuke was friends with Naruto since she tried to adopt him but couldn't due to the Sharingan she always visits Naruto at the ophan with Itachi and baby Sasuke and She and Kushina knew each other Kushina told Mikoto what her son name would be. so Mikoto would not have any hate toward him. But other than that I love this chapter |
| superlions280 chapter 4 . 6/21/2023 Erm I’m pretty sure danzo took shisui’s eye so shisui jumped off a cliff in front of itachi so he could get the eyes and it was ordered to kill his clan |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/17/2023 Ok ok sakura isn't annoying this time, I could get use to it( not that I hate he's I'm just use to her being annoying in other fanfic) |
| Jewel Gestoso chapter 1 . 3/17/2023 Finally the chosen one! I finally found a I wanna read! Rjjfdjemthfkemrnd so excited |
| KvAT chapter 22 . 1/8/2023 any chance of you returning after 12 years? |