Reviews for This Time Around
karmcmahon chapter 22 . 2/17
Damn, 8 years since an update. I liked your story!
Ireland Scott of BROH chapter 22 . 1/10
Yes. Absolutely beautiful!
Mr. Blackwood chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
Well written and enjoyable story.
Megi Keishii chapter 22 . 12/3/2017
Oooooo thatshould be interesting, to see Sakura taking Kurenai’s title from her.
Pika5490 chapter 22 . 12/3/2017
Okay, as long as I ignored my triggers (Uchiha, mainly, along with incompetent medic nin) I got through this. It's excellent, and I really hope you continue this. Plus. that's the meanest fricking cliffhanger ever. If you aren't going to continue, at LEAST tell us what your plans were! I mean, yeah, with all the ridiculous stories going around this one won't particularly give me nightmares if it's never continued, but I'm a curious person at heart! You can't just DO this to us! T-T Please Update. Even if it's to say you're never updating again. (Which I'd rather the update NOT be, but I mean, yeah)
Pika5490 chapter 4 . 12/2/2017
SPOILERS TO CANON Shisui committed suicide after Danzo stole his eye, and Itachi was ordered to eradicate his clan, which was planning a coup d'etat BTW, Itachi was there BC Shisui went to Itachi immediately after getting one of his eyes stolen by Danzo and then jumped off the cliff. Itachi didn't know that Danzo stole the eye (I think), was given the other eye, and then followed DANZO'S orders to kill off his clan, gaining the help of "Madara"/Tobi, and joining the Akatsuki BC of Tobi. He also kept Sasuke alive to atone for his sins, and because he REALLY loved him. SPOILER END I loved the story so far. Hope you fix the mistake, or label this an official AU Time travel fic, where they go into an alternate reality or whatever, but other than that this is really cool
Silence42 chapter 22 . 11/13/2017
we need a suprise... UPDATE! UPDATE! UPUPUPUPUPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPUPUPUPUPDATE! (casually stolen from not only the spy from tf2 but another story, cant remember which though)
thecatleader chapter 22 . 11/6/2017
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE
Leopardheart44 chapter 22 . 10/10/2017
This is a great fic! I hope that you’ll continue with it one day :)
Trekkie Padawan chapter 22 . 10/8/2017
This is really good so far! I hope you update it soon.
Lone Warrior Ersh chapter 12 . 9/25/2017
Because orange is the anti-angst? Forget that! Dark colours all the way. I hate bright colours. Yeah, I use drk colours, but I do not get angst. Ok a little, but I do laugh and smile.
Lone Warrior Ersh chapter 9 . 9/25/2017
feels like this is canon... Them going to the past. I like that is fanfic is simply. Yet there is so much.
ShadowBasilisks chapter 11 . 9/10/2017
Oml once me and my dad were river rafting and we fell of a waterfall bout 10-16 feet high and he frikin dragged me down underwater when I could have floated above it since I had a life
jacket on... It was fun though when I opened my eyes underwater and saw everything (cuz the water was quite clear...) so yeh he didn't wanna lose me so he grabbed me and we both were dragged under the current we ended up okay though crept Casey (we were with friends; it was a pre-wedding party thing) broke her leg cuz she got caught between the rocks at the top of the waterfall so husband Ryan (newly married cuz she was the one getting married and the pre-marriage party was for her and her soon-to-be at-the-time husband) had to carry her down the isle
Nikimo chapter 2 . 9/6/2017
I'm extremely sorry to say this but Mikoto never thought of Naruto as a monster nor a demon fox. She knew that Naruto was the son of the Fourth Hokage and his wife, Kushina.
Ash0011 chapter 22 . 9/5/2017
whelp it's been seven years, the story was good while it lasted
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