Reviews for This Time Around |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good beginning. I like it so far, and i wonder when naruto will tell him about the fox... or maybe he knows already:/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic so far! :D Please write more soon...:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LIKE THIS IDEA! GREAT WORK BUT PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD CAN YOU NOT HAVE SAKURA REGAIN HER MEMORIES? |
![]() ![]() ![]() xP i wanted 2 no wat teh otha consequence (sp?) was tat they didnt think of... ah well~ i hope u upd8 soon so we'll no wat happens xD lalala~vicki |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was great..as uaual! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice portrayl of Sakura in this chapter. Nice to see she has admiration for Sasuke and is friendly towards Naruto. I think since the Uchiha clan didn't get wiped out most probably consider him "another Uchiha snob who thinks he is better because he has Sharingan" Also since they can't reveal how much they know how about letting some events playing out like normal *ie Naruto stealing the scroll, same team 7, same likes/dislikes/goals except for Sakura* probably learning a new technique from the forbidden scroll since he already knows Kage Bushin no Jutsu *maybe the jutsu the fourth used to get right behind enemies no matter how faw away he was* and developing that close bond with Iruka until they reach certain points *ie Orochimaru during the Chuunin exam and the Akatsuki later on* Would be interesting to see Itachi come back either for revenge or had his body taken over by Orochimaru. Anycase keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() I love your story, but I can't get to chapter five. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it! It was cool how you allowed Sakura in it even if she wasn't in the beginning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story never fails to amaze me. Please update soon! I love you! |
![]() ![]() nyah! this story get's cooler and cooler! ... did six years just pass by this fast? anyways.. UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So...the two parts are going to be two different stories? Same 'history' but different? Like...the second installment would have key elements from the first installment? anyway, good job on the story. |
![]() ![]() Hey, that was a nice chapter, though a bit short. I liked how you made Sakura and Naruto start to become friends, since I hate how Sakura only cares about her looks and how she wants to spend all her time with Sasuke. Hopefully now she'll start to like him as a friend. But it's a good sign that it will eventually happen since she wears pigtails now. I really like how you make them have good, solid backgrounds. You gave Sasuke and Naruto have backgrounds, and now you gave Sakura one. It's really interesting to read about them. It's a nice change in pace from the original manga and other fics. everyone makes the villagers admire and adore Sasuke and expect great things from him, but you made it different. Some of the relationships of the characters are different too, and it's nice. Your fic is different and unique. It's fresh and new. Hopefully your creativness won't run out. I'm looking forward for more updates, but please make the chapters longer. |
![]() ![]() ohuah... that was kind of cute... o |
![]() ![]() very good chapter well done and it fits well with other ones. I'm glad that you are going not to have parings it the first half. For as much as I like paring fics I still have difficulty beliveing that thriteen year olds are into committed realaionship. lookin forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() Yay! I love this story so far! I cant wait till the genin exams. Are Naruto Sakura and Sasuke gonna be in team 7 again together? I cant wait until u get up to the Chuunin exampart Yay! Hope you update real soon! |