Reviews for This Time Around
Becky Yuy chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
this is such an awesome story! i cant wait till your next update. this story is so original, i just love it. sasuke and naruto are so cute! im guessing only those two remeber because nobody else seems different and i like that. if too many people remember than it would be same old naruto story only everyone is younger. well im rambling so i guess ill say toodles and tata for now!
Blind Kunoichi chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
Holy...wow. This is so amazing. I wouldn't focus on any pairings for now, given that they're six year olds, but I think Naru/Sasu would be the way to go given how close they're becoming. Please update soon!
The DCG chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
Bit short, but realy good.

Adding this to the watch list.
Peacebunnie chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
Yay, you updated! I like serious Naruto, and I'm glad they are both smart enough to be testing their own capacities and training themselves. :) And I wanna see their plan. Write on!
darkdragone chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
GOOd but make sure you do come out with another chapter

rating 9of ten
Pite chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
Cool man make some chapters AND Longer!
0-Mighty Bob -0 chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
Nie, been waiting for more chapters of this story. While I hope for many fast updates (cause I'm horriblely impatient when wanting more of a good story to read) I prefer even short quality chapters like these than machine-gun writing with little thought put into them, so keep up the work

It's neat to see Naruto actually using his head, and just plain fun to see him and Sasuke geting along as friends. Wonder if just that alone is gonna change things (or even Itachi's plans. They still don't know -why- he did it. Unless you believe that whole 'Testing my capacity' thing, which I for one don't) Mikoto thawing towards Naruto is also good stuff.

The whole pairing thing...I myself have some pairings I like above others, but in the end as long as it's well written and believable, it doesn't matter. And while most of the time I'd be one of the ones screaming out 'Give it a rest, they're only 12 in the series!' in this series it's kinda not as bad. I mean, in a society where you're trained to be a weapon from a young age and have to acknowledge the fact that you could die before you're old enough to need deoderant; well I suppose that kinda makes em grow up a bit faster. Live young, love young, die young as it were.

Ok, wrapping up...will we see any perspective from Itachi, or others that may have noticed Naruto and Sasuke's out of the blue friendship? And for the record if reviewer opinion is to have any sway in this sorta thing (which we already know isn't going to important to the story) I'm all for NaruIno. Anyways, eagerly awaiting more chatpers.
Adhenefallen chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
Good luck on writing your books! Also thank you for updating. I like this story. I can't wait to see what happens.
Wrath of air chapter 3 . 8/3/2005
please update soon this is getting good.
TopQuark chapter 2 . 7/31/2005
great work i hope to see more ..
KaguyaVulpes chapter 2 . 7/28/2005
Cool! That is awesome. Ive never read a story about them going back into the past to change the future. That was classic, especially a 6 yr old Sasuke calling Naruto a Dobe.
0-Mighty Bob -0 chapter 2 . 7/26/2005
Neat...seen one or two stories where Naruto winds up in the past, for whatever reason and tries to change things for the better. Not sure I've seen any with Sasuke going back, nor Sakura or any of the others. But in this one you have them both going back. Cool beans that. Looking forward to seeing how things go with the two of them having 6 years(7?) head start on everyone else. Though I have to wonder, if Naruto suddenly does alright in school(I doubt he'd EVER be near the top of the class, he's more of a hands on kinda ninja rather than paper) would he still wind up on Sasuke's team? Ah well, looking forward to seeing where you take this story.
Fic Slayr chapter 2 . 7/22/2005
ok ur fic is very unique, its good that naruto and sasuke get along, how are u going 2 make the uchiha massacre? i never thought about why naruto ate like that, and it makes sense, ur writing is very good but please make ur chaps longer and update soon
Adhenefallen chapter 2 . 7/21/2005
i love this story please update soon! I'm gonna add it to my favorites list. "sometimes they forget" that line was really sad...
Fic Slayr chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
good fic, its a good change to the angst i nromally read
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