Reviews for This Time Around
blackhole chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
that was cool! usually only one person is from the future or something like that, i hope that you update soon
exrxr chapter 2 . 7/14/2005
wha! this chapter is so SAD! it nearly made me cry! CONGRATS! this is the first fic i came upon that left me so emotionally distraught and nearly in tears.

but i still consider this a good fic though!

about the pairings? ... well, i'd rather it be sasunaru cause you know, give them a second chance in life to be together etc. etc. but if it causes too much biased opinions then just don't have any pairings. i'm sure you can still make this a good fic without pairings.

just keep the good work up!
pyrakitt chapter 2 . 7/13/2005
Awesome! I've read quite a few "Naruto goes back in time to make things better." fics. This is a unique take on one and I definetly love unique. Everyone depicted so far seems very in charachter with believable bends in personality due to the circumstances. Don't worry too much on describing what people are wearing. Spending even a whole sentence on clothing can throw off a story and make it a boring description instead. As for pairings, I agree with several of the other viewers and feel that your writing style would lend itself well to a no pairings fic. If there are going to be pairings all I can hope for since you've already stated that they will be subtle will be that they will not involve Naruto or Sasuke. At any rate please keep up the excellent work, I look forward to the next chapter.
mercva chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Excellent story so far - I like how this is different from other 'rewind' fics. Significantly different.

Mikoto's characterisation so far is very involving, and just about spot on to the char I need to create in one of my fics (_;)

Sasuke really changes quite a bit, reacquainted with his family!
Rightfully Lost chapter 2 . 7/9/2005
This is so good!

Update soon!
Rightfully Lost chapter 1 . 7/9/2005
Awesopme story so farr!

I can't wait for moree
yurok chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
i think this story have potencial im curious of the things that sasuke and naruto gonna change in the "past" for a manner of speaking :P good job _
Krylancelo chapter 2 . 7/7/2005
I like this! I'm happy you updated so fast! It was nice to read, and I'm happy Sasuke no okaasan gave Naruto a chance. I think this is nice, and I hope to be able to read more!

I'd be fun if Itachi confronts Sasuke about his abrupt change.
seven of wands chapter 2 . 7/7/2005
...saa... i shall patiently await the next update. it will keep me interested, i am sure.
Morgri chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Hey great story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully the future will get brighter for both, even if there are some bumps along the road.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2005
I love your story! This chapter was really sad! I was crying! BUT I love the way that you change Naruto's past! I wondering how is Naruto and Sasuke going to prevent Itachi from murdering his own clan? I think the reason Itachi killed all of these people is because he was alone even with Sasuke. Itachi was always admired and envied, sometimes even hated because of his skills...I don't think Sasuke can forgive him, but Naruto I think can help Itachi like Neji and Gaara.
pixy chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
love the way you've discribed sasuke's mother. her notice of the changes in sasuke and trying to accept naruto, although it will take a while, as a child and her son's friend and not a demon is very well written.

in later chapters will itachi or sasuke's father notice changes in him like what his mother realized? Sasuke and Naruto obviously still remember their abilities from their alternate life...yet do they have enough chakra to do it now? is that what they are training towards? well the only way to answer that is to Please write more! Just love this story and i find myself rereading it alot :)

for pairings...just friendship between them is fine :)
Lena chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Love your story! Can't wait to see where it goes :)
Audriel chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Nice! So they were adults trapped in children body. Will the future change? If I'm not wrong, Sasuke's mother name is Mikoto and the father is Fugaku. You can find it in Wikipedia. Update soon!
Pie Eater of cookies chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
This is really good! Most of the younger naruto fic's are not very intresting, but this one, I just cant look away, I have you bookmarked...

Anyways' please, post a new chapter soon! I cant wait!
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