Reviews for This Time Around
cfox chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Not sure if I have reviewed this but it has a good plot to it and looks like it is shaping in to a good story.
Bronwyn chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Sorry I don't review often so I really don't know how, but I really like this story so far and hoping for a happy ending. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you don't give up on this story. I'm a big fan of naruto and all types of anime/manga so it you see any good ones let me know even if they are yours. I about to go check you author page to see what else you've written. good luck with the future or in this case the past.
Cantdeletethisaccount chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
this is so good!please please up date!is itachi going to see that saskue is acting differnt?well i guess i going have to wait huh?

YOUR STORY ROCKS!
Lost ninja1 chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
Oy I just love your story. Its so cute and gives a lot of hope for the two. pluss chibi Sasuke and chibi Naruto are to cute for words... just the thing to perk me up after my computer died and I now suffer with my brothers...

oh well ' Anyway the only thing I could think of to maybe inclue in your story is maybe a bit more detalie on how Naruto and Sasuke look. I know there sapost to be yonger but it helps if theres actal descritions of them...or even the other people like say Sasukes mom or even Itach...anyway I still love it! update soon!
Ziz chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
COOL FIC! No, really! The whole if you have second chance what would you do Naruto version is awesome!
Byakuganchick chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
Well done! You've actually created a plausible 'Naruto visits the past' fic and everyone is still in character. You are so going on my favorites list.
dark-griffin chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
wow! just stumbled on to this and its great! i love sasuke naruto friendship fanfics. i like it this way. many people like to take that one step farther. are those two the only ones that came back into the past or did other people come back too? update soon!
stargazer92 chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
yay! i always liked sasuke's mother...hehe continue on!
DSecret chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
Wow! That was great! I hope you can update soon. Just wondering, is it only Naruto and Sasuke that went back in time or did other people too?
driftingstar chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
This is really, really cute. -

BTW, Sasuke's mom is Mikoto... I think... ;
Melpomene the Muse chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
Very interesting. I like where this is going already. _ Umm... I'd really like to see some Neji/Tenten, but I won't pester you about it.

Anyway. Your characterization of Sasuke's mother is very nice, and I like how you are having her try to like Naruto (poor little guy). It's sweet.

Well, I look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

~~Keera
person chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
Ah! No! No pairing 'cause you can't have a pairing to satisfy everyone so just make it a Sasuke and Naruto friendship fic.

Anyways, poor Naruto. Good story so far. I'm getting kind of anxious about the whole Itachi thing. Sigh.
Latavia chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
*whistles* I knew you could write really well done FFVII fanfiction, but dang...even your Naruto fanfiction is awesome.

In any case, the characters were amazingly in character, which should always be admired. Great pacing on the story, as well. Keep up the good work! (Not that you don't anyways, but...)
Carscard chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
Hello! Carscard here! -

Hey, I like how this thing is going on. Sasuke and Naruto friendship trying to prevent the known future is a good combination. I like how you write, I even put your author name as one of my fav at explorer's option.

I like your other fick Coeurl from FFVII fandom. It's cool as well. I hope you can update both of them soon.

Carscard -

PD Greetings from México!
pixy chapter 2 . 7/4/2005
aw! i just love this. But poor naruto! at least he has sasuke with him this time around :)

also lovely how you've made sasuke's mother. her acknowledgment that something has definately changed about sasuke.

i hope this will be updated soon!

oh! for pairings...think it'll be better without one at all for the two boys.
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