Reviews for This Time Around |
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![]() ![]() No matter what Naruto is more powerful then Sasuke due to the demon fox sealed in his stomoth and I wonder how Sasuke will get power now that he will not follow Orochimaru anymore. I would like to see Naruto meet the other members of the soon to be rookie nine and Sasuke and Naruto is two members of the rookie nine. I think Sasuke and Naruto can use Chirdori and the Rasagan but don't have the stamina and chakra(well Naruto can use the fox's charka for this jitsu)yet and need to train more. Currently Naruto and Sasuke is powerful enough to stop Itachi and maybe Naruto can stop Itachi if Naruto will go all out with the fox's chakra. |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter. It was interesting to read from Chikako's point of view. I think it would be a good idea to refrain from romance, there is already so many of them in the fandom. Of course, you do as you please, I won't mind really. Looking forward to the next update. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good - I hope that Naruto and Sasuke can become better friends out of this and that they change the few things they know should be changed. I really liked how you brought up what it was like for Naruto to live with no one and nothing - it made it a lot more real. Can't wait for the nest chapter. Later!* |
![]() ![]() This is very interesting... I keep wondering why this idea hasn't been used more often (or maybe I haven't read the stories that DO use this idea). In any case, I nearly fell in love after reading two chapters. :) Sasuke's mother's name was Mikoto; I believe it was mentioned in the manga. But it doesn't really matter *shrugs* Her character as a caring mother is well-portrayed, and her resolve to like Naruto more is admirable. The story is great so far, especially since Naruto and Sasuke remember all their previous jutsus (though it would be funnier if they didn't). But I suggest that while they retain their abilities, they shouldn't have the same stamina and chakra control as they did in their "alternate life." Why? Because stamina and chakra comes from training the body, whereas jutsu is technique, and therefore engrained in memory. And Sasuke can become quite frustrated when he can only use Chidori once. (hehe) The story would become very, very different with Naruto and Sasuke already knowing what happens... I really hope this will be a long AU because I just love those things. And please don't put in pairings. I'm so glad to hear that any pairings will be subtle, because it seems like every fanfiction section MUST have romance. I find that anime and fanfiction without pairings are less popular than those with romance, but that's just bs. I respect authors who can write any decent story with a plot WITHOUT romance. Half the reviews for romance stories are usually from romantic little fangirls. Unfortunately, some of the best stories almost always have this yaoi pairing. Nothing wrong with yaoi, but still... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sasuke's mother's may not have been mentioned in the anime, but it is in the official charater book, which someone has already translated and had put the information on this website: According to the site, her name is Mikoto, and Sasuke's father's name is Fugaku. There are some other Uchihas named at this site if you need more names. Anyways, this chapter was pretty good. Normally, I'd pester you to make it a Sasuke/Naruto pairing, but since you've wrote this fic really well so far, I'll leave it up to you which pairings will be in it. |
![]() ![]() wow! love your fic so far! Sasuke can make the seals to the chidori...but can he and naruto(rausengan (don't remember spelling) ) creat their special attacks like before...with the same amount of power behind it? please more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! very interesting to have both sasuke and naruto remember their 'dream' and hopefully more chapters are on their way soon. |
![]() ![]() Hi, this is blackhypnos101. I just wanted to ask you NOT to make the pairing(s), if any, NaruSaku or SasuSaku. I think a bit more highly of Sakura now, but I dont like her with either of her teammates. If the romance isn't important, could you just eliminate altogether? |
![]() ![]() What a wonderful idea! I don't think I've ever seen this idea carried out before...I can't wait to see where you go with this! As for the pairings...might I suggest... Sasu/Naru? *grins* ...Just because they are together in the past...and all the things they've gone though... 0) |
![]() ![]() Oh! This is neat so far! I'm all for the oddball M/F pairings. Most common would be Naru/Saku. But I prefer Naru/TenTen. If anything though, I kinda hope that you'd throw pairings out of the window...unless it's a vital story element. Badly written romances can be distracting and irritating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! nice story! i really like da idea...however...u know ur bold words? maybe u could space them out a bit cuz their hard 2 read. anyways...i prefer NO pairings at all. friendship is nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *smiles* that story was pretty good. keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() I like this idea. I think it would be funny if Sasuke and Naru-kun did/said things that six year-olds didn't know, and made people suspicious. It would be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not joking I was thinking of writing something... similar to that for the last few months. Too bad I can't formulate the right way to write it. I like yours. It's good, and you should continue. |
![]() ![]() very interesting idea, i like it alot so far... please continue it sounds very promising |