|Reviews for Tainted White|
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/2
GAAAH! CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGER!
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/29/2013
PLEASE UPDATE! This is a great story, and I'd really like to see what happens next and how it ends. It is getting really good... oh who am I kidding, the whole story is GREAT!
| kazuko59 chapter 19 . 10/23/2013
I love it!
Great storyline n the way Risa gradually realise her feeling for Satoshi was just so very well written.. N you show Satoshi's character so well here.. N Satoshi n Daisuke's friendship is always welcome XD
Will be waiting for your update, so please do? :)
| Sleepyreader319 chapter 19 . 6/20/2013
Evil! But amazing nonetheless. Update soon!
| Linariel chapter 18 . 3/25/2013
Second time reading this and this story is still so incredible it’s a weave of many things in one. The Mystic’s Dream is such an enigma and you can’t help but feel sorry for her at the same time fear her, and I don’t like her in certain ways. Mainly because what she’s tried to do to both Satoshi and Risa. She lives for a love from a man of her past who is connected by blood to Satoshi the heir, and if I am thinking right some one similar in certain ways to the past Hikari.
I always thought that Satoshi and Risa will eventually end up together both the manga and a smidge in the anime brought hints of that. Which I really loved in it’s own way. I thought they were a sweet couple. I really love how you wrote both of them together and how you gradually led up to their feelings for one another. This story makes me think of the manga it’s consistency to the way the stories span is flawless. Not only that but the connection that is shared between Satoshi and Risa is so pronounced in this. You didn’t make Hiwatari out to be some perfect romantic which is perfectly accurate because he’s not but his love for Risa is gradually bringing things out. Risa being his sacred maiden is so so perfect and the way she is the reason the white angel Krad comes out is brilliant also. You write them all so well everything spins beautifully and you keep the ethereal quality of the manga and anime in this story with the whole artwork The Mystic’s Dream. Which is a wonderful concept I must say. I truly am enjoying this story and I do hope you continue and finish it sometime in the future.
This such an excellent piece of literature it really shouldn’t be left unfinished. I wait patiently for the next chapter I want to see what happens to poor Risa I want her to be saved somehow! There must be a way to separate her from the lovesick quite insane emotional Mystic’s Dream. Oh you can’t leave it at that please continue!
| Ace Clover chapter 19 . 7/20/2012
Are you going to finish this story? Please do so! I know it is almost a year since you last update but please please update. This story is really interesting! I want to know the rest of the story!
Update sooon. Pleaaaaseee
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/7/2012
i love your story and the love in it. but could you post a new chapter now i'm dieing to see what going to happen
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/4/2012
Please update very soon, this is my favourite DNangel story that I've read! ;_;
| Amrit chapter 19 . 6/18/2012
Pleas keep WRITING PLEASE
| tritomy99 chapter 19 . 5/25/2012
it's been a while since you last updated your story and until now i have been expecting a new chapter. please continue your story since its really good...
| Jelly chapter 16 . 4/28/2012
Hi! I've only just recently stumble across your story, and I don't even know where to begin with this, but it is AMAZING! I really love your writing style, and I especially love how you've portrayed the characters; it's so believable to the point where I feel like I'm just watching/reading straight out of the anime/manga. I've enjoyed every single chapter so far, and I am praying that this message can get you to update some more. By the way, the part where the Mystic's Dream was downstairs at Daisuke's house, hunting for Satoshi and Risa scared me, LOL. Please don't tell me that you've abandoned this beautiful story, since your last update was in 2009 :(
I really want to read more of this! And I'm pretty sure there are also a tonne of others that want to as well :D
| Fuyumi-chan chapter 18 . 4/10/2012
No matter how many times I reread this story, it never fail to amaze me. You really write so well! I'm hoping that you'll update this story soon. :)
| RikuDai chapter 19 . 1/30/2012
The story is sooo great! Please! Please! Please! Update! ,
| Linariel chapter 19 . 1/22/2012
This story is amazing. You stay so true to the characters while adding so much to them. The whole dark secret that binds Hikari's to the Mystic is so amazingly put together. This is like reading the actual manga in so many ways if not better at times. I really enjoy the pairing of Satoshi and Risa I always saw some chemistry in there when I was reading the manga and watching the anime at times also. I could see it happening.
Very well done how your bringing it all about. I can't wait till you update please don't let this story die you are so gifted in the way you've wrote it and how you protray everything. This is a real gem. I'd love to see it continued and finished in the future. I want to know what happens to Risa now that that creature is inside of her. Gives me the shivers. But so so amazing.
You've left off at a cliff hanger that must be picked up. Please!
| anito chapter 19 . 8/21/2011
PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTERS SOON,BECAUSE I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!THIS IS MY FAVORITE FIC SO PLEASE FINISH IT!:)