Reviews for Before the Storm
Aelan013 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
One of the most beautiful stories I've ever read.. thank you.
Ookami-Ryuu chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Nice (:
yllom21 chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
Well written, I like you opinion of Temari and Naruto, well written and wonderful story.
Mercedes no Inuarai chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
O.o Why do you not have more reviews? Seriously, your characterization is amazing! What a great look into their characters and what might have happened during the trip to Sunagakure. Hardly anyone seems to remember all those days of travel; it's refreshing to see someone who does!
Uozumi chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
That was great and in character! I really liked the story!

~ Uozumi
Sariachan-KokiriLeaf chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
First, the things I don't like about this fic. ;)

I don't like the way Temari drools over Naruto, it seems OOC from her, and I'm a TemaShika fan after all.

I don't like the hints about, well, Kankurou's (and Gaara's O_O' ) interests in porn. I know it's normal for any boy (and some girl I bet) to have such interests, I think the way your described it, the words you used don't fit well the Naruto world.

That said, I really like lots of things in your fic.

I like Naruto's characterization, one of the most IC I've ever read of him. You managed to make him change from hapy to sad to fool to serious in a completely natural way. You must be proud of your skills.

Furthermore, I like the speechs and inner thoughs of the characters, and the ending of the story too, even if it was maybe a bit too long.

Overall this is a really good fic imho, so it's now in my FS list!
Smoking Panda chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
I love it! Naruto and Temari heart to heart is a great storyline...Great job! -
Hakanaki chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Ohh...This is very pretty. I like it. It shined alot of light on Temari, and characterized Naruto very well.

I loved the evil laugh bit. It was like "...XD!"

And the thing about tiny stars. That was neat too.

I'm such a rabid Gaara fangirl, I'm in complete and utter denial of his death right now .
ensngre chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Very nice feeling in this one. :)
Azamiko chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
I like their attitudes...the way they interacted...