Reviews for State With Kings
Gamer1012 chapter 8 . 12/14/2014
That was me making my weird fangirl noises,
Dont judge! Btw happy otaku day w
TekoloKuautli chapter 8 . 12/13/2014
That was awesome! I loved the story hehe But I cant help but mention that you made the prince more pigheaded than he actually was, not that much of him was seen in the film... Was he really that desperate to avoid his engagement?
Smile Black chapter 8 . 11/2/2014
i really enjoyed your story :)
EmeraldHope chapter 2 . 4/22/2014
The prince was apart of that family! This is really good so far
lillybug45 chapter 8 . 7/22/2012
Awsome story!
Hana no Sutoomu chapter 8 . 6/9/2012
Wanted a lovely bed time story so i come onto fanfiction for a read. Find your story and i read the first chapter and i think well i have to read more, its to brilliant not too! so witht the thought of one more chapter in mind i continue reading, and reading and reading. And noe its 4 in the morning and i can hear the birds singing! Thats how much i loved your story! to good to stop reading even when its the early hours of the morning and i'm tired.

Thanks for writting it!
satomika chapter 8 . 2/26/2012


ShellyMay chapter 8 . 11/1/2010
love it
Mochiiko chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
awesome! this is getting interesting xDD
Calemirneth Evans Potter chapter 8 . 8/1/2010
i like the story, it's nicely planned and it makes me feel excited as to find out what will happen next
CYLi chapter 8 . 1/5/2010
Great story! I love it. Great narrative. The story was nicely plotted and the characters nicely portrayed. I like your depiction of the Prince. His human form was only seen for less than a minute at the end of the movie, but way you described the prince was so concise that his character became as solid and impressionable as those of Sophie's and Howl's. In short, great characterization. I really enjoyed your story and admire your writing. If you don't mind me saying, your writing is very good for a freshman in college, which I am currently. Reading your story made me realize just how I need to improve my writing, which is rusty to say the least.

Keep up the good work. I look forward to more work from you :)
little-haruno-sakura chapter 8 . 9/11/2009
aww that was soo cute! i loved it! good job!
Arhazivory chapter 8 . 10/6/2008
Quite a lovely story. Very well written.
Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 8 . 5/1/2008
good story
Lady Moon Dragon chapter 8 . 4/13/2008
Lol. I'm glad that Sophie convinced Howl that she's not going anywhere...and Ha! So Jocelyn knew she was going to marry turnip head anyways, because she knew that Sophie didn't know that she had accepted turnip's propsal, and by telling Sophie that, she could get rid of Sophie-not that Sophie wanted turnip head anyways-honeslty, why would she want turnip head if she has Howl? (I really do love his beautiful hair, and voice and eyes-I think they did an extraoridnary job with him). I love it how you end your story "oh what a pretty fire!"-lol, that's classic and funny at the same time...I also love it how Howl proposes to her once and she doesn't realize it-and the second time he does, she ignores him because she has people to "attend to". Honeslty, Sophie's right-its a good thing she came along-otherwise the great and beautiful wizard Howl would have found himself buried in a mountain of trash. And I dare say that there is no way that Howl, and Markl could live without her again-even when Howl says they could..:D I'm glad the prince figured out that she doesn't love him because she loves Howl, and that Howl figured out that its hime she wants to spend the rest of her life with..(honestly, so would I-like Sophie, I wouldn't be able to put up with all the splendor and stand on ceremony crap..) Wonderful story, I like it how Sophie ends up becoming the strong lady we all knew she could become...I hope you countine writing...

lady moon dragon
248 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »