Reviews for I just wish somewhere along this broken path
Rei Talyn chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
o. Good setting and imagery, and it's a male Revan, not a female Revan this time. Ya! Good stuff!
Sarah1281 chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
This is really good! It's so sad...poor Revan...
Shadows Run chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
I like the visual on broken diamonds on the ground. It's kinda like a shattered mirror. I like all the different shades of Revan and his relfections, that stare and wait. Sweet. It's sad how you said he laid out plans and someone else ruined them. Forever is a long time to wait. Sniff. Very good.