It’s a cute and unique story but it could’ve been a bit better if it was beta’d. Thanks for sharing your work!

So far, it’s been a great read but this definitely needs to be beta’d. There are too many incorrect use of words such as their, there, and they’re. “… appreciated why Harry, Ron, and Ginny held her such great steam.” It should be esteem not steam. Literally completely different words and meanings.

I know I am a little late to give you encouraging reviews. I love this story and I think you did a beautiful job. thanks for sharing your talent with us!

I love this story so much!

So beautiful

sooooooooooooooo cute !

I'm glad that after talking about the Mission at the Three Broomsticks while having dinner at Fred's apartment Fred told Hermione stories about George and himself I think it lighten things up even more. I hope Fred is right about Hermione not losing Ron's friendship because of this mission I hope Ron's love for Hermione helps him to understand how important this mission is. I'm afraid it not going to be that way though I think Ron's love for Hermione is going to make him jealous and childish I hope I'm wrong though if I'm right I know Fred and George will do what he said they do.

Really liking this so far especially because Fred isn't dead and Harry, Ron, and Hermione have graduated Hogwarts before joining the Older and for now at least there is no Horcruxes hunt. I really wish that it was like this in the book not so much Fred's and Hermione's mission but the fact of Harry and the othe two being able to graduationed Hogwarts and no Horcruxes hunt. Anyway I like how both Hermione and Fred nere said a streat out no but both consider the prose and coins to this mission and I like how Fred put a little humor in to it by asking Hermione to marry him in the way that he did I think it quite wise of the to continue this conversation of this mission it shows that both are taking this very seriously which isn't so surprising for Hermione but is just a bit for Fred.

The one pairing that I love above all else in Harry Potter, is the Hermione-Harry brother-sister pairing

I cried with The Notebook

Yes, this chapter was the best, along with many.

Omg I loved that it was very cute. But u misspelled some words

I just love this story!

They already told her parents that they have been dating for two years.

If spell3 is worng snd most like will sorry but spelling is VERY heard for me and my SAMSUNG doesn't help matters especially when I'm already feeling like a loserso if any of my reviews had a lot of miss spelling and or bad grammar you now know why.
Well Ron did act like and idiotic ass at first surprise surprise but he did finally let it seek it in and let the wise person that I always knew was in there take over and be happy and truly honestly happy for both Fred and Hermione. Which is good that he did finally less to the wise part of him for if his actions in the graveyard didn't killed, I WOULD have or a less mad him feel like ancomplete jackasspig-headed jerk. Fred or the healer was wise to put that spell on Hermione's bed otherwise she would have gotten up snd went right it to battle along side Harry. I'm do happy that none of the Weasley's were killed or their close friends although it saddens me that there were a few Death along the light side it would be unrealistic for all of those on the side of the light live and those on the dark die,as sad as it is those eho didn't make it will be honored and remembered. Love how Haley trund good hopefully that Ron will see that she is the one that can take the place that Hermione has in his heart I think she and him cacan n be real happy together and they bothdeserve it. Love Hermione brithday party Ron's and Haley's gift was a beautiful way of saying all a great friend and (in Haley's case) going to be great friend can say happy birthday and congratulations. Loved the story from being to end thinks for shearing it.