Reviews for Seams
Night-Beyond-Reality chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Nice story there!

Btw Caio is Spanish lol
Pokegirl11 chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Good. But it would be more WAFF if you would use one language, instead of English w/ random japanese and Italian thrown in. Still, good.
loretta537 chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
this is good, i'd like more of aya and yuki becoming friends.
Ja ne Kat chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
i love this, it's so cute the song so fits aya. and i can see him looking at it like that. lol
SerpentineRose chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Nice story! I love the part when they tricked Shigure-kun.

By the way, "Ciao" is Italian for "Goodbye". The Vietnamese word for "Goodbye" is "Chao", with an "h". _ I'm Vietnamese, so I should know.
HanaTohruShipperMorgan chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
...TT_TT...

Fangirl Japanese. Songfic. Referral to characters by their Japanese 'juunishi' signs. Lack of a decent hook.

There's your criticism. I couldn't pay attention long enough to read through it. I'd almost forgotten how distracting song lyrics can be, and I barely have the patience to read through long fics as it is.

You can do better than this.

Have a nice day!

Hana
Adi88 chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Yet again, I seem to have committed my number one no-no... read it, loved it, didn't review it...

Anyway, it's beauteous. Lovely bonding! The trick with Shigure and tying him up seemed a bit over-the-top, but...

And once again, great song. Songfics... they're kind of like voice-overs in movies. They can be very distracting and disorienting if they're not done well, and usually they are not done well. But you've completely got them down, so well it went right under my radar until now. I luvvems.
vinbunny chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
uwa! yyaay! i loved the part when they tricked gure-san! im beginning to like all of your stories.. please keep writing! an, and for the translations, ne is like saying 'right?'
See Them Llamas Run chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I like it, but I feel Aaya was a little OOC. Wel, it's cute anyway. -

I know what the last line means, but I don't feel like explaining it. Can I have a cookie anyway? _;;
waterlily chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
'like the seams of a dress'

well, from what i learnt just now, the seams of a dress cannot be seen from the outside. likewise, the brothers' relationship is not as easily seen by outsiders as the people already involved. so contrary to popular belief, they do have something of a brotherly understanding. it is merely not as obvious as the fact that i am deserving of a cookie right now...

i enjoyed explaining that... but im not too sure if i did it correctly.

questions: are u japanese? and do i really get a cookie? even if i dont, i'd still like to have one anyway!
littlefiction chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
That was wonderful. Nice to see the "rift" closing a bit. Aaya has the potential to be such a good brother. And that song, it just screams Aaya.
BumblingLobster chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
I think chao is italian.

Anyway, nice story. Ayame was so sweet to Yuki.

cgflower
Llamachick chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Aww that was adorable! So cute.
Kero69 chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
In the glossary, "Ciao" isn't Vietnamese. It's Italian. (_")

I really enjoyed the fanfic because it's rare to find myself interested in this sort of fic. Keep the good work up.
lazy fat kitsune chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
aw...nothing better than fluff and all...
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