Reviews for Girl Troubles
SuuuuuuperMAD chapter 17 . 6/20
You son of a bitch! The story was great but it was supposed to be VIVI...VIVI there are plenty of LuNa stories out there. Dammit!
Toastychee346 chapter 18 . 4/10
Damn! This is one of the best fics i have read in a while, I especially like ling ones. It ended really well in my opinion though...but i know this is late and i have read the entire thing, but its alabasta not arabasta...in the japanese anime and manga that is how they pronounce it
Dun be chapter 17 . 2/20
Good stuff
Guest chapter 16 . 2/20
Crazy shitt
jake65432a chapter 11 . 12/14/2015
2nd commander
Guest chapter 6 . 6/27/2015
It's a great story but luffy is out of character he would never try to punch his friends
Guest chapter 17 . 5/22/2015
I want a sequel
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
Just overall the fanfic was alright but what really made it bad was when vivi got sick. I know you said you changed it but you should of really just stuck with how it actually goes. There was some other parts that killed it but I'm not going to mention. Other than those little parts that killed the story it was actually good so thumps in the middle slightly up
Guest chapter 7 . 4/5/2015
It's supposed to be vivi idiot
chris chapter 8 . 3/8/2015
ok i know its hard but people just don't get luffy right i mean he's so hard to show and write he has a whole life and it quite hard to make a replica and he would never punch his friends over food
WhatIsWrongWithU chapter 8 . 11/15/2014
Nuuuuh Vivi-chan is gonna get her heart broken. That damn nami. Why couldn't she take zoro. I would. He would be my slave MOHAHAHA. *cough* srry.
luke chapter 17 . 9/2/2014
please make in a sexy romantic sequel
Guest chapter 18 . 7/17/2014
MORE MORE MORE MORE SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL I BEG YOU!
Guest chapter 17 . 4/16/2014
This is great but again wasn't it supposed 2 be a vivi and luffy fic?
Guest chapter 11 . 4/15/2014
This is great but wasn't it supposed to be a luffy and vivi fic?
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