Reviews for Girl Troubles
Guest chapter 6 . 6/27
It's a great story but luffy is out of character he would never try to punch his friends
Guest chapter 17 . 5/22
I want a sequel
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
Just overall the fanfic was alright but what really made it bad was when vivi got sick. I know you said you changed it but you should of really just stuck with how it actually goes. There was some other parts that killed it but I'm not going to mention. Other than those little parts that killed the story it was actually good so thumps in the middle slightly up
Guest chapter 7 . 4/5
It's supposed to be vivi idiot
chris chapter 8 . 3/8
ok i know its hard but people just don't get luffy right i mean he's so hard to show and write he has a whole life and it quite hard to make a replica and he would never punch his friends over food
WhatIsWrongWithU chapter 8 . 11/15/2014
Nuuuuh Vivi-chan is gonna get her heart broken. That damn nami. Why couldn't she take zoro. I would. He would be my slave MOHAHAHA. *cough* srry.
luke chapter 17 . 9/2/2014
please make in a sexy romantic sequel
Guest chapter 18 . 7/17/2014
MORE MORE MORE MORE SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL I BEG YOU!
Guest chapter 17 . 4/16/2014
This is great but again wasn't it supposed 2 be a vivi and luffy fic?
Guest chapter 11 . 4/15/2014
This is great but wasn't it supposed to be a luffy and vivi fic?
bob chapter 15 . 3/24/2014
so sad, i think im gonna cry
Guest chapter 18 . 2/17/2014
Now it's zoro robin time
Guest chapter 11 . 2/17/2014
2 fleet
Guest chapter 9 . 2/17/2014
first fanfic fight I actually liked
Guest chapter 8 . 2/17/2014
im straight too I hate faggs
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