Reviews for After The Moon
Ashen Author chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Impressive how you make the Mazoku almost human in many ways, yet not /quite/. I like it. And Xellos pulling a no-holds-barred alliance will hopefully be a thing of horror and beauty.
Jenmoon1 chapter 15 . 8/18/2013
love it
One percent chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Impressive. I can already see all the possibilities of such a wonderful plot!

Although, I have to say that the way Zelas died made me feel really sorry for Xellos.
Rouge-Impulstice1 chapter 15 . 10/24/2011
I enjoyed all, it was soo great! :D
wolf gardian chapter 15 . 6/27/2009
aw how cute i loved your story i love the way you write them keep it up 3
wolf gardian chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
well that was sad but really good i bet later chapters are gonna be even better thx3
tsutsuji chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
While I don't generally read Xelloss/Filia fic, I'm very intrigued by the start of this one. I absolutely love how you portray Zelas and the relationship between her and Xelloss. I think it makes sense that she would do this, especially if she is certain that Xelloss will take care of things for her. Excellent first chapter!
Ryu-Zero-Rei chapter 15 . 8/16/2008
SO I read the last chapters in one swoop.

It was a good read I liked the feelings whiched mirrored in their antics (I mean zels, Dynast, Xellos and Filia)

In the end it turned out that the Mazokus feel quite similar to humans bu still different

And nice to see how the relations build up

good work and a pleasant read

SeeYaSayo by

Ryu Zero Rei Baura Alapa Diil no Zerodyme Cupura Pa Azarak Vile Lua Darog
Ryu-Zero-Rei chapter 11 . 8/15/2008
Of course I read the Lemon hmm to say not perfect the lemon part but good for visualising-

Without it something would have been amiss.

But ... even then to think of his Mistress ... Xellos needs Filia more than he knows

Ryu-Zero-Rei chapter 10 . 8/15/2008
nice going Filia.

Somehow i can truly imagine Xellos feelin betrayed.

Wehn Mazokus are capable of feelings and in storys why not Creators freedom ut those discussions we already had ne

So can't wait for next chapi and mor Xelfi

Ryu-Zero-Rei chapter 9 . 8/15/2008
Somehow I must say I almost expected Dynast to change his mind. IN that way at least it was not to far off-

But poor Dynast to create a General equal to Xellos means he weakenend himself quite a bit.

Xellos seems quite distracted ... reminds me of try- he's somtetimes way to arrogant... well thats him

the fight was nice, but short

on to the next

Ryu-Zero-Rei chapter 8 . 8/15/2008

I announcend my re Entry in the Bound Review, didn't I?

But to be honest i feel like I already read this Chapter but I see no review of mine...

That's not fine of me so this is now corrected.

I liked the idea of Jellys eating Slugs... Gourry protecting lina .. such a bad Luna XD

For the rest the chapter itself was a little bit uneventfull, but showing the direction of the story. Didn't want to miss it.

So oodjob and of to the next one


P.S.: I know it was a real long time since I plopped up IT'S NOT MY Fault! ok it is... but not exclusevily XD my great and only Love,my little Angel suddenly appeared and threw me off balance and up until now I didn't find a urge to read
Paillette chapter 15 . 5/24/2008
Ah, this was a really fantastic story, and you even managed a happy ending that was in character- so rare! I'll be sneaking around your other finished works as well.

Your writing is really superb. One nit-picky thing I was confused about was the usage of the words "hallow" and "concur." I think you mean "hollow" for hallow- hallow literally means "holy" or "sacred," which we all know Xelloss could never feel! I think you mean "conquer" instead of "concur" as well- the latter means to agree. I just thought I'd point these out as they popped up often. Great work! ~P
Paillette chapter 4 . 5/24/2008
ah, I have to comment on this chapter as well. Very very good :) I appreciated Gourry's school lesson as well ;) Did I mention yet that you are very good at characterization? ~P
Paillette chapter 3 . 5/24/2008
This is really fabulous so far! Chapter three is incredibly concise. I like the little summon book monster and his relationship with Filia. Xelloss is wonderfully in character, and I completely love your reasoning about Filia's loneliness. You have really developed her character. ~P
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