|Reviews for Those White Eyes|
| fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 3/6
I guess I realized the story could take on different meanings depending on whether or not you incorporated the last paragraph or not. At least for me, without the clarification (omitting the paragraph) it took on more of a friendship ending, whereas it had more of a a romantic ending (with the paragraph). It was a great lesson for me in seeing what a difference an addendum can make.
| My name is top secret chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Good but not much of an ending. Still good though. No hard feels. Ja ne.
| rikki chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
.,yow!,a wonderful review for a wonderful story by a wonderful oliveink!.,that is if you'd consider this blabbering a wonderful review. . . . .anyway..,great story!
| SavvyEnigma chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
This isn't cheesy at all! *sob*
| Unknown cherry girl chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Well written I love your stories! Keep up the good work.
| yuushibari chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I like an oblivious Gai, and Neji's so-called "proposal" is sweet.
| Ally Garcia loves it chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
it was very short very very short but you know what i liked it very much well keep rockin!
| xchirix chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
OMG! This is so not cheesy young lady! *says this dramatically with air quotes*
IT IS AWESOME! Kyaa!
You are such a talented writer that I envy you now...
YOU ARE SO GOOD WITH ONE-SHOTS!
Neji said to Tenten to become part of his family...
AMAZING! A littla sad for Tenten though...:(
BUT AMAZING! :)
| misto-shadow chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
E. - That was extremely cute, even if poor Tenten doesn't have parents. I luffles NejiTen, it is just about the greatest pairing in the world, next to MaxFang, of course. :D And I luff Neji's oh-so-adorable proposal, I do believe he would say that. XD Just something simple you know, but it would have some super amazing meaning behind it, like that. - Le sigh, your story was lovely. :) Fantastic job, mi amiga. And cheese, tis good sometimes, you know. -
| glass-pencil chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
It was sad... Until the end. As intended, I'm sure. :)
But yeah. Kudos. I thought you did an amazing job.
| animeluver7 chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
i think it's so cute
| nun-yah chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
OK I was going to chew you out before I read your note at the bottom. tenten and neji are a little harder to write about, try working your way up from ino and shika to naruto and hinata to sakura and sasuke and then to tenten and neji, otherwise it was very cheesy!
| dragonkyuubi101 chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
Yes, it vas a little bit cheesy but, NEJIXTENTEN PAIRING ROCKS! IT IS #1! WOT!
| WeaponsMistress chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
This was cute1 So... nice...
| Complexity66 chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
aw, how ke-ute! n.n;; keep up the great work!