|Reviews for Missing parts|
| Phoenix halfbreed chapter 20 . 10/31/2010
Hey I noticed that you haven't updated in almost five years and was wondering if you were ever going to get back to this. I always read this when I'm feeling in a GITS mood because it's such a good story, but it makes me sad that you've kind of abandoned it. I was hoping that this review might make you might at least make you think about continuing.
Your ever loving fan,
| Srnity chapter 20 . 12/25/2009
Great! Please, write the suite !
| BlackBirdSigh chapter 10 . 10/4/2006
guh... to tired...
| Kelpietree chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
okay, you get better as you go along. Spelling and sentence structure still need improvement in some parts and maybe the pacing could have been better ordered. Otherwise i've been following this one for some time. So much suspense. Keep going! I wanna know what happens!
| Starline chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
Hmm...this is intersting. I was not sure what to think when I first looked at it but after reading it again I was intrigued. Section 9's world is very dark it is plasuable something like this could happen to one of its members, especially with all the enemies they are making. I am curious to see how this ends. Just a few typos, nothing big that takes away from the story. I hope you continue on with this story.
| GFcauliflower chapter 20 . 3/16/2006
wow. This story is so intrscate that, save the TogusaBatou factor [which is charming to no end!] I could see it actually being an episode or two.
can't wait 'till the next chapter!
| greeneyedbastard chapter 20 . 3/7/2006
This is such an amazing story! Other than a few minor grammatical errors, the characters are excellently written. Hopefully Togusa/Suki can be returned to s9. I finished reading ch.20 and had to wipe the tears from my eyes.
Hopefully, Togusa and Batou will get together. I don't think that Togusa's homophobic so much as he's a bit old fashioned. He doesn't seem to be the type to even think about messing around on his wife. Other stories I've read had him trying to distract himself from the 'ahem' naughter antics of his teammates (Toxic lollipop is a good example of this type of behavior.)
| anonamous chapter 20 . 2/18/2006
wow intereting plaese continue i can't wait read what happens next.
| Silaeralin chapter 20 . 2/5/2006
Love the story so far, hope you keep writing.
| Stormraven chapter 20 . 1/29/2006
Absolutely brilliant! Love the plot and composition of the story. Hope to see more soon!
| etto chapter 20 . 1/29/2006
Wow, I haven't been around for some time and now there's two new chapters of this. Good! This is getting really interesting.
| Anibee2481 chapter 20 . 1/23/2006
YAYAYAY! I love it when you update this :D :D :D SO HAPPY! I'm glad they're starting to understand Togusa...and I hope they end up together! I love those songs on the CD too...GITS has such great music.
| Anibee2481 chapter 18 . 1/18/2006
I LOVE THOSE SONGS! And I'm so glad you updated. HURRAY! Please update again soon. I really REALLY need to see that Togusa and Batou will be okay.
| Infinity-Nevermore chapter 18 . 1/18/2006
Oh, nasty! Did he have to beat her/him up like that? I understand he's mad but hasn't he heard that you don't hit females for that very reason? Poor Togusa/Suki. I wanna know what he/she's gonna do now too. Isn't there some kind of secret, like, password or something? Until the next update!
| Paranoidgirl chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
Alright, the first thing coming to my mind was 'Bastard! Give Togusa a break!' and it still is, but the story works out good for now... just give Togusa a break... please?