|Reviews for Only Bug's and Dragon's|
| Attiqah Gensui chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
going on my favvies for sure!
| Marasmine chapter 1 . 4/15/2007
That was fun!
As an obssesive beta I have to point out a couple of small typos but I forgot to copy the paragraph! When they arrive at the market you use 'wanders' which I think should be 'wanderers'. And soon after Hakuryu 'lead' Herbie into an alley, should be 'led'.
I apologise for my compulsive corrections but the rest was so micely done, I couldn't resist mentioning them
| loanshark chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
ah! love this! :) have read very few good hakuryu fics...this is wonderfuL! :) yay~ great job!
| NaTsUkO-ChAn chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
wow.. That was really COOL lol... and very cute too.. I never thought of Herbie'll be putten into this and hehe.. aww Harkuryu was lonely.. I never really took notice of that lil' dragon.. Nice story short excitement but fasinating
| YamiDuo chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Cute ... Not quite like I thought it would turn out from our discussion at the theater but still quite good.
| ruji chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
oh how cute! you did Hakuryuu some justice there, he's always not getting enough love. nice! _