Reviews for Restored, The Chosen One Is |
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![]() ![]() WTF DID YOU NOT FINSH IT? ITS BEEN 11 YEARS SURELY YOU THOUGHT OF SOMETHING NOW IMA CONTINUE THIS STORY IF YOU DON'T |
![]() ![]() random question but are you in a group home? That time limit thing sounds like it is from that kind of situation. I've been in group homes almost all my life so ya I know a thing or two about how they can be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love the start of this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's great story |
![]() ![]() learn to spell |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am in a couple groups and also some private boards if you wish i could post whats here and see if someone would like to take up the story id offer but im a reader not a writer really though ive made several idea suggestions would you like that Snow |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! great story! i just found it because were on the same c2. just a few spelling challenges you could fix: tatooine, not tatoowine Skywalker, not SkyWalker Beru, not Burru and actually, its Owen, not Ben just those few words. everything else is totally rockin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I need to know what happens and if obi-Wan's okay and can't wait til they confront Palpy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor Obi-Wan.. hope he gets healed. Great chapter! And you did good with the lines from the "other" movies! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() That was really,really good! But please,PLEASE write more chapters! I wanna read more about it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I hope Obi's ok. Update soon! i can't wait till the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story has a good premise; looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was all remembered well enough! Very nicely done! :) Glad to see the update! :) |
![]() ![]() Love it, love it, love it. |