Reviews for Dangerous Temptations
FireKidd chapter 7 . 9/5/2005
nice cliffhanger. really makes you wonder since tyson is those type of REALLY persistent guys. can you include more about kai and tyson and the rest? :) would really like more action! thanks oh and update soon :)
isisisa chapter 7 . 9/4/2005
o.0 ok... I really like this chapter! )
black dragon fang chapter 6 . 9/4/2005
I thought it was going be Brooklyn and Cali but now it looks like it will be a Kai and Cali! I can't wait to find out who she will go with, or even if she goes with either of them in the first place. Good chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one!
black dragon fang chapter 5 . 9/4/2005
It's that guy again, he ruins everything for her! I hope she gets over him soon and moves on. I like the garden of eden thing but sometimes it's kinda hard to understand it all completely. It's interesting though, good job!
black dragon fang chapter 4 . 9/4/2005
Aw, how sweet! I really like it a lot and the only suggestion I have is that you double check all of your grammar and spelling before you post it up. Great chapter!
black dragon fang chapter 3 . 9/4/2005
Tyson is such a goof, I could see him doing something stupid like that! It seems like Cali and Kai are going to get together, or will it be Cali and Brooklyn? I love surprises! I can't wait to read more and find out what's going to happen.
black dragon fang chapter 2 . 9/4/2005
lol, I would have died if I ever spilt coffee on anyone! This was a cute chapter, a little short but it had all the things we needed to know. I wonder what was in the envelope? And I know what it feels like to be review deprived, I had almost none when I first started!
black dragon fang chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
That was really good! I was a little confused about the whole garden of eden thing but I get it now and think it's amazingly... awesome? I couldn't think of a word! I still can't figure who the guy is, it's driving me crazy. Good chapter, I like it.
FireKidd chapter 6 . 9/2/2005
whe... been deprived of fics!

now im gonna devour all! runs in crazy circles, grabbing all fics

update soon!
FireKidd chapter 5 . 8/13/2005
whee... confusing style ne! but it provides substance

and material to think...

if not i'll be speed reading through your whole fic...

haha now that you've explained...

i understand!

i'm enlightened! whee!

more more!
shadowdragonlady chapter 5 . 8/11/2005
sry... lazy to sign in... .o

5W33T~! i really lyk your 'confusing writing style'. i actually understand it (or i think i do... -.-o) n it really makes me think. keep up the gd work n update soon!
FireKidd chapter 3 . 8/7/2005
dum dum dee dee dee dum...

haha long time to review!

kinda caught up in sch life, read ur fic again.

update ne! you're taking so long...

nice way of intro the characters

isisisa chapter 3 . 7/4/2005
she's living next door to kai? lucky! the chapters are still short. keep it up n update soon!
isisisa chapter 2 . 7/3/2005
i see u've changed ur style of writing... still, it's really good! so wat did the contents say? update soon!
FireKidd chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Hey, seriously, this IS GOOD. FABULOUSLY GOD!

Really looking forward for more. pls update. the freshness is refreshing and is good to the whole of the fanfic community. all first timers should be like you! alas, i can't upload mine... and its so lousy compared to yours... *in my mind

feeling so inferior...


pls write more. its so good!
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