Reviews for What Now?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Well I thought this was a really cute and awesome story and thank you for writing it for those of us who read these kind of things :)
edwardfiend chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Loved Mustang's answer: "we do whatever we want Riza". Very simple and true. Great one shot.
CrazyHorseNinja chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
I don't know why, but this is the FIFTH M-rated fic I've favorited!
Angel Fantasy chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
Well, I must say that for your first try, you were very talented. I won't blame ya for spelling errors; I do the same thing once I'm out of school lol.
Alek chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Cool. Just Amazing, sweet and explosive. Good job.
Drifting One chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
For your first lemon, it was pretty good!
ArtisticRelevance chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
mmhmm dat wuz gewd! X)
Winry Brennan chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
I Heart Lemons! Espesially Royai lemons! Don't worry. Great job!
Nilmiel chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Nil: A good idea, but a little cliche-ish. Mustang, i can understand, but Riza was... n. Very un-riza-ish. She woudn't do that so quick. I mean, i kno she loves him, but...no. To fast. It would have been better if there had been more leading up to it.
Faith de la Alovee chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
That was probably the best lemon I've read on here. You've got a talent...and maybe too much experience x.O. Anyways that was great-congrats!
crazy yaoi fangirl chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
For your first lemon that was pretty good!
Kazanekyo chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Holy... F-... You so rock.
rizahawkeye21 chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
lol hell to hand basket... :D very good... keep writing...
sakurapixi chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
... And this is your FIRST lemon? YOU ARE GOOD. I swear, that was really good. Your choice of words fit so well and reading this was so seductive. I admire your writing abilities. :]
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