Reviews for Strictly Experimental
batmanhasmyback chapter 4 . 4/21
finish please!
greenprisoner chapter 4 . 12/11/2015
why do you love cliffhangers so much ;c
Guest chapter 2 . 5/9/2015
lol she came all over him from just a kiss xD
Guest chapter 4 . 3/13/2015

Damn it
Guest chapter 2 . 3/13/2015
potterlife chapter 3 . 11/1/2014
Let us know if you are writing no more
potterlife chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
Please write more! xx
howmanyisthat chapter 2 . 6/21/2014
That was amazing lol
Guest chapter 4 . 4/9/2014
Please write more or tell us if you are not ...
NAJ P. Jackson chapter 4 . 9/23/2013
It's always disappointing to see a good story left unfinished D:
Runecutter chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
Talk about making the worst of an already bad situation.

That's what's coming when a "mental" girl once acts rashly and emotionally, it goes down the gutter and fast.

Doesn't seem to be a good point to break off the story, even when, i guess, writing about a three way fight won't be easy to write, in essence you're ending this when it gets around to being a real story not just a vignette about forbidden fruits... so... why? Just one or two further chapters would have rounded it off, would be able to set a new state of things in scene that would work for another year or so, until they really get around to talk everything out and decide what to make out of it - without breaking all their friendships to pieces they never could repair again...
Runecutter chapter 2 . 4/18/2012
Can we get a drawing to that tongue movements? It sounds all so ... complicated... twisting the tongues while nibbling a lip at the same time... is that even possible?

But yeah, i get the gist of it. He is GOOOD. Capital G, capital everything else good.

Still doesn't solve the inner conflict of betraying his best buddy of five years with his best female buddy of almost the same time. Stupid experiment!
Runecutter chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
That was ... interesting.

I'm always for a good nice Harmony story, but this... it's weird to assault him that way, to press his insecurities and his moral beliefs by more or less forcing him to go behind the back of his best mate... that way lies madness...
RavenWing1997 chapter 4 . 12/10/2011
it is a good story
XxX Loveless19 XxX chapter 4 . 5/31/2011
o-m-ggggggggggggggggggggggg! this is sooo delicious! that was a great little cliffhanger at the end, too...hope to see more work from you!
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