|Reviews for Famous|
| LateOrliBloomer chapter 3 . 12/18/2005
wow this was a short chap.
i like your writing style and the dialogue is well written. it's natural-sounding and flows smoothly. the NY grammar makes it all the more convincing.
update soon! i'm curious to find out what direction the story's going to take. to be honest, i don't see any future for Race and Medda. she looks like she could be old enough to be his mother. from what you've set up so far, it appears as though Race will realize what has happened and go rescue her, but after that, if she refuses him, it could only end in heartbreak, especially for Race. but is there a loophole?
| snowflurry chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
This is incredibly cute -
And the writing is very good
Keep it up!
| Aurora West chapter 3 . 7/19/2005
"The sound of the slamming door echoed in the long, dark corridor."
Sounds like the end of OotP. What an intense chapter. I'm really enjoying Medda the feminist.
| Aurora West chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
"After all, she had invited him up for coffee."
Hahaha, it's like that episode of Seinfeld where the woman invites George up for coffee, and he says he can't drink coffee at night because it keeps him up, then he keeps leaving messages explaining that he didn't realize coffee didn't really mean coffee, and at the end of the episode he has to replace the tape in her answering machine so she won't hear the messages, but it turns out she'd heard them that afternoon already.
| madmbutterfly713 chapter 3 . 7/13/2005
Uh oh! Major cliffy! Race ain't gonna like this! Update soon!
| RoeBoat chapter 2 . 7/10/2005
Awesome story! Great plot and pairing. Just one thing- I think Medda would remember him. Remember that one scene at the rally when that police officer knocked him out? Medda was right behind him and was fighting and saying "he's just a child!" and stuff like that. Great story other than that.
| madmbutterfly713 chapter 2 . 7/8/2005
Okay, this is written really well, but the combonation of Race and Medda is a little, um, disgusting. No offense or anything, cause it's written really well, just, maybe, not the best pairing. I still want you to update, though :)