Reviews for The Ugly Duckling Effect |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, I LOVED this! This is honestly one of the best stories I've read in a long, long time. I laughed, I cried, I screamed with delight and frustration... It was just such a wonderful experience to read this. I wish it had went on forever. |
![]() ![]() I really only have one thing to say, 'wow!' You may not think you have skills, but you definitely write better than most. You aren't average in any way! You're above and beyond! This story was so funny, and I felt so embarrased for the characters whenever they did something stupid. It takes a good author for readers to feel what the characters feel, and get so into it, that they're physically leaning into the page (which I did) :). Keep writing, because you are one of the best authors I've found on this site. |
![]() ![]() ![]() JEEZ! AZNEYEZ, I LOVE THIS STORY. Which is probably why I'm rereading like a year later, lol. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say, this was amazing. Your writing style is superb. Please, continue writing. And if not for fanfiction, than for the world. You are definitely a gifted writer. And I love the story plot. You might want to check out some of my stories as well. Sincerely, Chrmedfreak. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! I liked the Sora Leon at the beginning and how you ended it! The indecency charges were funny! Great fanfic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFA Chapter 6 is my all time favorite chapter now. This whole story so far is extremely funny. I couldn't stop laughing. I love the AkuRoku in this. It made me laugh so hard even though there is only a little bit of it. Cloud is so funny I really don't like The Riku Cloud and Leon Sora pairing's but in this story you made me like them a lot. GO YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() T-T this story will always be in my life! I'm serious! This is the best, greatest, most awesomeness, most perfect, most insane story that i will ever remember! Forget 100%, forget 10-10, that's just touching the edge of the window, break the dam window and you'll really see results from readers! You can win dozens, if not thousands, if not hundreds, if not unlimited amounts of awards for writing the best SoraxRiku story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! It's still the greatest story ever written! It still makes me laugh. Too bad you're switching fandoms. T_T Why? Don't stop these wonderful stories! I won't forget you! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() .Ever. Instant Favourite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOW CAN YOU POSSIBLY SAY THAT YOU'RE A GROSSLY OVER_REVIEWED AUTHOR!1 I MEAN YOU GAVE ME TINGLES!1 GOOD TINGLES!1 no really, i loved this fic and well, it could have been better with well ... ... smutty hardcore sex no joke. sparkles/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit I love this so much I can't even describe it. Fantastic writing, fantastic work. Can't wait to read more from you, and thank you! ~Michi P. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are no words to truly describe this, but I will say. I cried. Hard. At the end. It was truly worth every word, every moment I spent reading it. This is, by far, the most indescribably beautiful, deep, romantic thing I have ever read, (besides Twilight) and I will read it again. And again, and again, until I possibly go blind. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the fact Sora and Riku finally got together. Though everything was sweet and romantic, I was still stuck on the little group discussing what Riku had done. Especially when Riku was drinking to much coffee and Axel freaked out. “Ohmygodohmygod!” Axel chanted frenziedly. He shook him so hard his teeth chattered. “Oh shit! Calm down, Riku!” “I am calm! I was just saying that-” Axel slapped him hard across the face. “Ow! Axel!” “He’s going into hysterics!” he reported to Kairi. I don't know why but that part put a huge smile on my face. I'm so sad this story is over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very, very amusing. I cackled several times when I read this. Now, onto the next chapter... D |