Reviews for The Ugly Duckling Effect |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god oh my god... am over whelmed with happiness and am gonna cry...soo so badly! ...that was so sweet, beautful, well written,unbelievably explicitly astoundingly well written...just...wow...am right now over whelemd and my throat is all ckecked up and tgha was so so so cute! . I lurve it! RawR! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely frikin amazing. :D This fanfic made me laugh so hard on so many intervals! I'm so happy that this wasn't a 'forced' humorous fanfic like how most are. Good job and keep up the amazing work! :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was adorable! God, I fell in love with this story right after Sora danced with Riku at the club! Nice mental images! Anyway, it was really good, the second fic I have read involving CloudXRiku LeonXSora. Have to say I loved the last part with streaking Riku and Sora...Hilarious! Oi, and Sora with braces and big glasses is to adorable to imagine! I'm kinda sad it's over...But I will definately re-read it many times! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So many moments of this fic were just absolutely perfect. Everything just fit... gah. Wonderful. I applaud you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahahahahahahaha! Oh my God, for some strange reason unknown to me I found that one line, "Shit, there's another one!" absurdly hilarious. You had me rolling on the floor, lol. Ahaha, ah, that was a good laugh. Thank you for that, by the way, I love the story so far. Ash |
![]() ![]() I loved it. GOod job. I only wish there was more to read. ANyways it kept me laughing and crying the whole time so congrats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... you know what I would like you do? Make a preqel to this, telling about Sora and Riku's relationship in high school! You should seriously think about it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG!! I LOVED this story. it's so megafking good :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw *coos with happyness* That was so amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'He gaped as Cloud advanced on him slowly, brandishing a barbeque fork in one hand and a box of tampons in the other.' hahahaha that cracked me up. It really did. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello! wow i really liked this fic, it was just real sweet and everything. i like the way you write, it makes everything sound so romantic and stuff. ahaha i especially liked the part at the airport, i felt like i was watching one of those romantic comedy movies. this story has made me go "aww" and laugh so many times. anyway great job! i'm looking forward to read other stories of yours! bye bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO! YOU. ARE. BRILLIANT. haha the end of this chapter made me laugh so hard the ppl at work were staring. ' |
![]() ![]() ![]() I- I'm just- I don't- Gah! How will I ever find another Kingdom Hearts fic to read? This was PERFECT. GOOD. MAGNIFICENT. BEAUTIFUL. And goes straight to my favs. I don't think I have too much of those... Your writing... flawless. Your story... breath-taking. Your ending... mind-blowing. Your characterization... awe-aspiring. I have no idea how I'm going to get any sleep now. I'm just so... so... HAPPY, that just can't stop *grinning*! Or alternately sighing in bliss. Well, there was some stuff that I didn’t quite catch, but that’s only because I’m not native in English and it was clearly slang or just typical in that language. Much references to stuff made and/or existing only in America – or at least just not here where I’m from. But no worries! In the passage of time I’ve come to know most of the stuff, so I didn’t miss anything important, at least. (Hershey's, Kleenex, Windex, Civic, stuff like that.) About characters: I have this syndrome, kind of. I call it The Main Character Infatuation Syndrome. In short it means that I usually root for the main character. Maybe someone else (as well), but that’s pretty rare. THUS, I was most ecstatic when Sora was so beautiful that his friends couldn’t get a word out of their mouths for a long time when they met. And fourteen numbers! And what, sixteen drinks for free? Wonderful. I love it when the my fav character is something unbelievable. Axel’s comments were cracking me up every once in a while and I loved every single character in this. No baddies, yay. \o/ Their conversations were so well written that I could only read in awe and hope beyond hope that I will have even a tenth of that skill some day. Thank you, thank you, thank you of this fic, and I just hope and pray that I will find such masterpieces more often while browsing KH fiction. This piece of art has given me hope that maybe - just maybe - there is something more to KH fandom than thirteen years old teenagers trying to fish for some reviews with bad plots and even worse spelling. I bow down before thee and hope there is more to come. Maybe not to this story, but someday, somehow, another Riku/Sora and Axel/Roxas and/or Leon/Cloud filled goodness to feed us all in need for a good read. Thank you. Luv, reb |
![]() ![]() ![]() That syory was way too cute, I loved it. *bakes you a thank you cake*..- yes, thank you for writing it! |
![]() ![]() Despite some of the slight ooc of this fic, I really enjoyed it. I can't tell you how many times I giggled while reading this! The whole airport thing slayed me. Haha. Good job! This has got to be one of my favorite fics of all time xD and that's saying something, since I read a shitload of fanfics. :] |