Great job

Aww..

Your story was really, really great, although a little short, your plot was well developed. Sora's so seductive...I grinned throughout the whole story and it made my day.

This story was perfect. Amazing. Beautiful. Flawless. I loved everything in this story. The theme and meaning were really great, fantastic character/relationship development.

I just- UGH! There are so many things I could rave about. xD But in all honesty, this has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read.

Loveitloveitloveitloveit! This was so beautiful! It was perfect! It was upsetting and so happy and I can't see or think through my tears of joy.

Beautiful. No words exept that one. Utterly beautiful.

Amazing *round of applause* I'm really critical on fanfictiion. I have to say though, I love yours. It's beautiful, the end almost made me cry; absolutely beautiful. Great job!

Heh. Oops. Didn't mean to send that. Alright where was I... right! Roxas and Axel! I loved how you wrote them. Everything was perfect and made me laugh out loud (earning me weirded out looks from the people around me). Your notes are so adorible too. You seem like a really wonderfull person. Not just because you write so amazingly flawlessly but you're so nice to your reviewers. I've seen some authors that are like 'serioulsy you guys suck, why are you so dumb?' But not you! :D Your so humble, it's insane. Like when you said that you hope to one day deserve your reviews? Nope, nu-uh, you deserve them. 100%. Your perfect.

Hey there beautiful :) WOW alright, where to start? Everything was perfect. Seriously. Like it was almost slapstick at times but there was that overwheelming feeling of reality so it wasn't unrealistic just... what a bunch if crazy lovebirds would actually do. I loved Roxas and Axels banter (I kill for AkuR

I normally write more on reviews but I'm feeling lazy, so I'll just say I love it 3

I loved it!

BEST. SORIKU. FANFIC. EVER. *instant favorite*

I am LOVING this so far. Cloud is making this soooo funny! I can't wait to read more!

all im gonna say is WOW OMG AMAZING BEAUTIFUL PERFECT and THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS UR AWSOME AND SO IT THIS STORY

That... *holds out as long as possible to build the suspense* ...Oh, who am I kidding? Like I could have any other reaction when I've been raving like a hormonal lunatic (did someone say my name? Seriously, I'm gonna start putting that on the name tags) about this beautiful work of art every chapter? It was perfect. The whole story was goddamn perfect, and it makes me cry because your gift just proves how lowly I am. Anyways, what I forgot to mention last chapter was that- I totally loved your twist. AND, I never saw it coming. I mean, I figured something would probably go down at the airport (admittedly, not until the chapter before, when Sora did his PMSing routine), but seriously, I never saw the streaking thing coming. Not even after I read the chapter warnings! How dense am I? ... Don't answer that, please. But... yeah. I loved every single flipping second of this whole entire story, and while it took me several hours to read, it was also no time at all, and I wish so much that I could just do it over! I will now be stalking your profile and reading everything you've ever written! Just a heads-up, so you know. That way the name is familiar when your email fills up with alerts that I followed your story or left a review or tried to hit the Favorite button a thousand times before crying because it only worked once. I think this was a beautifully peaceful but crazy, sweet but sarcastic, sappy but firm ending, and it was just right for the story. Picturing Riku and Sora being surrounded with their friends, everyone they care about and who cares about them, and celebrating together in their own way just makes the happy tears come to my eyes. *rereads author's note* Excuse me. EXCUSE ME?! Did you say over-reviewed? Over-REVIEWED?! And LOW LEVEL OF WRITING SKILL?! Fuck that shit! Don't trash yourself like that! DON'T DO IT! You are incredible and stupendous and you have a huge fan base who adores your work (now including me, yay!) and I don't want to hear a word! There's modesty and then there's false modesty and then there's what-the-hell-are-they-talking-about? I swear, you're just like Sora with his whole 'I'm ugly' complex! You are a bad writer like Sora is a horrendously awful AND ugly person! And you have no idea how much it pains me to even suggest such a thing, so accept that you're awesome sauce and let it go! *stops and takes a step back. Looks over intense rant* Oops. Well, I think it'll be good for you to hear, so I'll leave it. Lucky you- you get the unfiltered version! By the way, if you ever write a book/actually publish anything that I can't find here on , please let me know! I'll be first in line to buy/read it! Unless I have to duke it out with your other fans... Well, I can deal with that, I suppose. I hope you get to see my long-winded reviews and spare a few minutes to read them. Hopefully they'll brighten your day. I have faith in you! Many wishes for a long life filled with happiness

Oh, my god! My dear sweet Lord in Heaven! I was actually hyperventilating during this, you know that?! And I had a pillow pressed to my face to muffle the screaming. I am laughing and crying at the same damn time and it makes it so hard to type this! You have forever earned a place of honor in my "Favorite Stories', and what's more, 'Favorite Authors' section. Even if everything else you've written is total crap (which, let's face it, is more impossible than me marrying Riku), you have unreservedly received my support and writer's love! You're amazing! One chapter left... oh god, no! I want this to last forever! Even though if it did, I'd eventually die of starvation, dehydration, or bad hygiene (most likely some combination of the three), because I would never budge from this seat again. I absolutely wholeheartedly worship this story and your amazing literary talent, and I want to thank you so much for putting this out for the world to enjoy.