Sora, you bitch! I have just realized (I know, I know, I'm slow) that when you write the characters, you make them so true to their actual selves (or at least how I see them) but at the same time, total melodramatic masochistic drama queens! Seriously! And I love them for it! God, what is wrong with me? *looks at stats again* Oh well, at least I'm not alone. In all seriousness, though! What the hell does Sora want? I hafta find out! Poor Riku *sniffles*

*passes out on the floor* ... *revives, comes shakily to sit back in the chair, rereads the last section, and passes out again* ... *revives from the second time (hey, my cheek has carpet-pattern on it!) and climbs back into the poor chair, resolutely keeping eyes from main part of screen* Um. Wow. *Feels something building inside; tries to hold it back* So. I really liked this chapter. It was very powerful *inner struggle intensifies* and also very moving and I can't wait to see *oh god, it's going to win!* where you're going *Brace yourselves! ! !* with... this... *floodgates burst* EEEEEEEEEEEE OHHHHMIIIIIIIIGOOOOOOOOOOOOD OHMIGOD OHMIGOD OHMIF***INGGOD EEEEEEEEE AHHHHHHHHHH OHHHHHH OHHHHH OHHHHH! ! ! ! ! ! ! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! YOU GOT EVERYTHING! ! ! ! *watches from corner of mind I've been locked in while the inner rabidslaveringfoamingatthemo uthbeast- I mean, fangirl- takes over* EEEEEEEEE! THIS WAS AWESOOOOOOOOOMEEEEE! ! ! ! ! *desperately wrests control for one brief second and, unable to delete anything in the little time available, simply hits post*

Ahhhhhhhhhhh! Ahhhhhhhhh! Ahhhhhhh! Ahhhhh AHhhh AHHhh AHHH! AAAAAHHHHH! Ohmigod ohmigod ohmigod! *switches modes of fangirls squealing* Eeeeee! Eeeeee! EEEEEE! *backs away from the keyboard for a few minutes to calm down* Whew. Ok I'm back. Oh man oh man, this cahpter was so amazingly AWESOME! Even for you! I mean, you have just raised the bar! Again! Before it was like ceiling-high, now it's like house-high! Geez! I LOVED this chapter, in case you didn't already get that. I love- no, ADORE- how we finally got to meet the rest of Riku and Sora's old friends! I thought you did such a perfect job of describing each one, I can't even describe it! Let me just say this- Mind. Blown. And with Cloud and Leon? Mind. Blown. Again. And them seeing Sora for the first time? (I know I'm going out of order but everything is my head is jumbled up now too, so it's only fair) Beautiful! This was wonderful. Let me put it plainly- you are getting favorited! This. Will. Happen. but wow, this chapter was just so unexpectedly good, even from you! You have surpassed yourself. Congratulations.

Ohmigod! Cloud is SUCH a drama queen! I mean, jeez! I feel sorry for Riku and Leon and whoever else has to put up with that! On the other hand, he's also sweet and obviously very committed and c'mon, he's hot. So I bet 99.99% of people will forgive him! Also, I'm very intrigued with their dicussion of making things work and how Leon and Sora are an effortless couple- I thought it was very interesting that Cloud saw it that way... Hmmm... *tries to read yur mind and fails epically* All I'm getting is images of Leon as a cross-dresser! That's not helping anything, and it was also on my list of things-I'd-be-perfectly-happy-to-never-see-in-my-life! Sigh... I guess I'll just have to read the rest... Such a terrible, noble sacrifice. I lay myself on the line for your happiness. *is slapped in the face by a suddenly-materialized conscience* Conscience: That's a lie! You're eating up every word and you know it! Me: Oh shut up! and get out of here, this is my review! *wrestles keyboard away and kicks Conscience out of existence- for the moment anyway* Oh, ah, I should probably apologize for all the batshit crazy things that pop into my head and get poured out randomly on this page. So sorry! If I'm freaking you out, I can go away! *gives sad Bambi-eyes before going to pout in the corner* But while I'm over here, exiled to the Land of Wackos, I might as well read a little bit more...

D'awww! And hot damn! I wanna go to that nightclub! I would totally be one of the girls watching, and I'm not even ashamed to admit it ;D This chapter was really good, too! I hope you know, you're definitely setting expectations for yourself! I love your writing style- it's really eloquent but concise. You keep it short and simple but still extremely descriptive, somehow, and I just love picturing the whole thing in my head! Very nice job so far :)

I was 'Bwahahahaha!'ing and 'Awww!'ing by turns here, switching off between the two so dang fast that it made me almost as dizzy as picturing Cloud in fishnets and high heels! *despite all logic, proceeds to picture said image again, and promptly falls off chair having a laughter-seizure on the floor* I really enjoy seeing how you've got their relationships all set up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Nooooo! Don't you DARE trash this! *checks stats at top of page* Oh. Well. Ahem. I see you you didn't trash it- good, that means people on here can recognize genius when it stares at them from a screen! I LOVED this! Whaddaya mean, this is crap?! If this is your idea of crap, I'm reading everything Kingdom Hearts-related that you have on here in hopes that's it's all this amazingly good! I love it! I'm only one chapter in, and I'm hooked! Thanks a lot... there goes my plans/hopes/dreams of productivity for the next few hours... and probably any shot of sleep... oh well! I have a feeling this'll be worth it!

Oh, my God. I've never been as in love with one story as I am right now.

This was perfect. Every single part. I laughed so hard at a few, I was almost in tears.

I love it! :D

Absolutely spectacular job!

So cute! You did an absolutely amazing job! I loved it.

JESUS CHRIST I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE CHOCOLATEYNESS OF THIS XD in in short this was bloody awesome

I have got to say I adored this story so much! I haven't laughed at a fanfic this much since Vanilla. This was so sweet and I loved the ending! Thanks for writing such a wonderful, funny and cute story!

"To beauty," Riku said softly. "Which doesn't mean a goddamn thing." They drank. "Unless you're as ugly as Sora," Axel added, as soon as they'd all lowered their cups. "Homely, jerk," Sora said, grinning. He squeezed Riku's hand. "Isn't that right? I'm homely?" "You're perfect," Riku told him, and Sora broke into smile and leaned in to brush their lips together.

That part was SO FREAKING ADORABLE! You broke my Squee Scale! XD

FUCKING HILARIOUS XD

OMG, please just make another one of these,I get soo emotional listening to Sora X Riku Yaoi music (7:32 music youtube) lol, gosh please another one already XD it is just THAT awsome!

Axel smiled sweetly. "I love you much, much more than I love chocolate."

"I know," said Roxas, pulling him down against the mattress. "Chocolate doesn't kiss back."

"But it does have nuts."

"Asshole!"

Lol awsome one, even though it's true XD