Reviews for The Ugly Duckling Effect |
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![]() ![]() Please, please, please continue the story. Its humor is the bright spot in my day. I love this story, especially the Cloud/Riku moments. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO! o my freaking Gosh, this is so hilariouse, i love cloud in here. my favorite part of all time in here is when ckoud just jas to make a drmatic enterence jsut to go tot he bathroom! i love it. where do u get your comedy!kepp it up please. i almost pee'd myself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() (note before we start: This is gonna be one hell of a crappy review XD) ... YOU! I LOVE YOU! PLEASE HAVE MY BABIES DX! Love, Buyo :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay Another chappie! I was getting worried that you wouldn't be continuing this :P I don't think you overdid it at all (though I don't watch many sitcoms so I can't REALLY claim to know very well) Either way, good writing with a wonderful dose of humor to balance out the little moments of tension. Sometimes, I feel that the humour is placed in awkward places and detracts from the overall realistic-ness of the story. But that's probably just me In your case, it's a good stylistic device. The lil part about the yearbook made me so nostalgic since I just recently graduated from High School too (though technically I'm not QUITE done yet). And that in turn inspired a bout of fanart for this fic I'm nearly done one of them and I'd be honoured if you'd take a lil peek at the works of a devoted fan I'll e-mail you the link when it's up. Overall, a very well done chapter! I can't wait to read more Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nie! I liked this chapter! I like this fanfiction! I love this fandom! Other than all that obviousness, I really did like your story. It was told very elegantly and will be one of the few AU fics I will recommend to others. Much love! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this fic a while ago and after reading the entire 4 chapters, I added it straight to my Alerts. You're a wonderful author; your writing style is great! Usually, I don't read much fanfic that has Sora and someone else other than Riku for pairings, but your fic had me reading the entire thing non-stop. I'd love for some more quick updates, but if you need some time to properly write a chapter, then take all the time you need! Don't rush yourself now, 'kay? ~Rynth~ p/s: I will surely leave a review for you each chapter from now on! You can count on it! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() one word: yummy. loved the portrayals, the overall writing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This very well written. Each chapter builds up steadily of what to come which makes me look forward to new upcoming chapters. I like the characterizations you did on each of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFL - I love you! Your fic always gets me laughing and I enjoyed reading it so much ) Thank you! Hope to see another chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! This story is so funny! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *dies laughing* I love the last paragraph. Oh God, I think I peed myself... That, was the best fic ever. Ever. I love you. Marry me. I'll even make breakfast for you in bed! *clings* Please, please update this fic soon. I'll love you forever and ever and ever for it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay new chapters! |
![]() ![]() yo! man I didn't add your story to alert so I forgot about it for a bit even though me and my friend constantly use the phrase "MM roosters oh baby oh baby" that is SO genius omg, I dunno how many times I reviewed this story maybe this is my first but w/e. Yeah I LOVE it so much I wish I wrote that well! holy crap, you need to keep working on it no matte rhow busy you are DO IT I wanna see some AWESOMENESS! |
![]() ![]() I laughed so much! X3 good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this is good. Sitcomish and humorous all in one! Keep up the good work and keep those chapters coming. If you keep writing like this you'll be a shoe in for one of MY FAVORITES...meaning FAVORITE FAVORITES! |