Reviews for The Ugly Duckling Effect
xmiso chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
YOU TURD! ITS SUCH A GOOD STORY BUT U UPDATE SO SLOW! HOW DARE U! *grumble* publishing a good story with ONLY TWO CHAPTERS! update faster! update faster! i love dis story _ *addes to favorites*
Aurons a sexy dead guy chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
Aww... lol... It's great... I hope you continue! It's so cute... sorry...
ShadowedDarkness chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
hehehe. Just as great as the last chapter! .

one complaint...what took you so LONG? to update that is. lolz. continue .
gomncan chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
Really really cute. :-) I love the ugly duckly stories, they make good plots.
Mimay chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
Hiya! heeheehee... I love the story so far, I hope to read more of it! Whahahahahaha... Had me laughing for ages! Gahahaha! Great story, funny, cute and sweet... hahaha I love it! Update so0o0on...

One Dread: That Riku makes the first move...

Yeah I have this thing... Where a character I absolutely lo0ve stuffs it all up P Yes... I am one of those kinds... gahahahaha... Well update so0on

- Mimay
Disco Kitsune chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
I absolutely ADORE your story! . UPDATES! lol, no pressure or anything .
Sky-Pirate-Tat chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
Finally! I was wondering when you were going to update this. This is funny yet sexy. I'm definately putting this fic up as my spotlights of the month!

*Watashi no ai, Tat-chan
Wolfiee chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
Awesome! You are one helluva writer, seriously 44 reviews for one chapter or soemthing like that, yah you rawke -grins- Anyways this chapter was awesome, I loved it so much and you are juss too funny. Really, its great, great, great, great, great. Okay um ... yah you probably think i'm an idiot right now but I promise i'm not ... -coughs-

Anyways good job, update soon please!
PaopuPop chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
Fantastic, indeed! Usually characters that are somewhat OOC like this tend to make me... feel bleahish, but the way you bring your characters to life makes me laugh so hard! YOU DESERVE EVERY REVIEW!
coffeeshop chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
whoa! that was awesome! yeah, I heard about that thing where authors aren't allowed to respond to reviewers... I got a petition in my inbox against it. haha, yeah... LOL i LOVED this chapter, it was hilarious! greatt job! P
Bffkmhr chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
Very funny! I was snickering the whole time. Especially at poor, flustered Riku. Sora's quite the tease, hmm? Cloud is very OOC, but he's great.
Cryysis chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
beautiful! you must update, i absolutly loved this chapter! i must go for now, but update soon! gtg, laterz!
yuffiegal chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
so cool! i really really love this chapter alot! plz pzl plz plz plz update really soon...:)-k
KHobsessed chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
WOW! That was so funny! keep up the good work!

PLEASE update again I come across great stories like this all the time where their authors just give up! Stay with it! it's awesome!
Mandeth chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
Yeah! Another update!

Wow good chapter. Sora can dance, that made me smile and the character's personalties are really cute. I liked the line '"Right in the middle of a nice kiss, he'll be suddenly moved by the urge to show you his Porky Pig impression."' It was so cute! I couldn't help but laugh! I would love to see that happen ( .)

Well anyway I need to go get ready for school (Whoo...) so I'll make the next review longer for you. Can't wait for the next update! I really hope it's soon.
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