| Reviews for The Ugly Duckling Effect |
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   LYama chapter 2 . 9/18/2005 Wow that was a fabulous chapter - You HAVE to do the next chapter really soon, I'm eager to read the Leon/Cloud goodness. Hehe. |
| Disco Kitsune chapter 1 . 9/18/2005 OMEffinGOSH! This ROCKS! No, seriously! PLEASE update this- I'm begging! ::amused grin:: This is a great first chapter~~! ~Disco Kitsune |
| Zero Saotome chapter 1 . 9/18/2005 *dies laughing* This is awesome! I don't know why you think it's crap, because really, it has a lot of great potential. Please update it! *on knees begging* PUH-LEEZE! I seriously couldn't stop laughing at the part where Sora and Riku meet up and Riku's just shocked speechless and then Cloud slips up with the homely comment. *wipes tears from eyes* Whoo, that was great. Please, write more soon. *gives a bribe of assorted bishie plushies* _ -Zero Saotome- |
| Mahon chapter 1 . 9/17/2005 Am massively amused by the wonderful interaction. Keep up the good work. |
| melissa chapter 1 . 9/14/2005 i love this story so far and i can't wait for the next update! |
| Mandeth chapter 1 . 9/11/2005 Ah! It's so awesome! I saw this when I was bored and looking for something to read (though I have tons of things I COULD be doing). Anyway, it's super cute and I want you to continue until world peace comes (so I guess you'll be continuing forever, eh?). Anyways, awesome chapter! Things I loved: The whole 'homely' thing. It was priceless and when our favorite little brunette told Riku he had split ends! I would have been mad if someone told me that, but hey! Riku was so it all works out. Cloud was pretty funny too. I like how he plays into the story and his humor is hilarious. This whole story is priceless! Things I wasn't too fond of: It was too short. I'm sorry, I wanted more! - It was that good! Hehehe...but there was nothing that I seriously hated. Well update soon and if you need a beta, I'd be happy to help, but that's if you want me too. (Betas are hard to come by now, cause I only have my friend beta-ing me and I beta other people and it's a beta fiesta! XD) So update and that was a great chapter! |
| Sapphire Light chapter 1 . 9/9/2005 Oh my god! this is so awsome, I'm really loving this so far and hapoe you continue real soon. I'll be waiting! |
| coffeeshop chapter 1 . 9/3/2005 oh wow, omg, LMAO. that was fucking hilarious - great job! D please continue! |
| Whatsupcanuk chapter 1 . 9/1/2005 Oh, you have to continue this! I enjoyed it so much. I loved Riku's reaction. So good more I need more! |
| Auzade chapter 1 . 8/31/2005 that was cute! WAY OOC but cute dude. you so far dont need a beta, but i'll offer my services to you if ya really do think ya need one. just email me your stories and i'll beta them and send em back. |
| Jackie chapter 1 . 8/19/2005 Hahaha. Love it. Keep going. I couldn't of laughed more. A speechless Riku, you truly are awesome. Yeah, we can pretend that I'm stalking you now. x33 I beg of you to tell me you are somewhere around the age of 14. I'm hitting on you through fanfiction reviews. O.o No,honestly, really, I couldn't get anymore pithic. |
| Kengirl92 chapter 1 . 8/15/2005 nicey story! |
| Iris chapter 1 . 8/8/2005 Wah, I totally love this! You have to continue it! |
| chad chapter 1 . 7/30/2005 Hey i think it is cool and the fact that riku was stunned by sora was awsome. make some more chapter's |
| Cryysis chapter 1 . 7/27/2005 thats good, u need to update soon though okay? well, i gtg, see you laterz! |